yes, the contrast of the eyes and the glass is better
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Thanked by: Crappy Blue Luigi, Garamonde
05-20-2012, 01:51 AM
Sorry but still not reading it. You had to tell me what it is before I can say myself what that is.
05-20-2012, 01:57 AM
then what do you suggest i do to make it more readable?
05-20-2012, 04:23 AM
Either make them have visible frames or make them all white. Those thin lines with only little contrast to her skin tone you have now are hardly visible.
Thanked by: Medevenx, Crappy Blue Luigi
05-20-2012, 01:20 PM
i'm kind of worried that this whole limited-palette thing is going to bite me in the ass eventually. oh well, i tried, anyway. right now, i'm not personally satisfied with the look of the spectacles, but i can't make them all white because they're right up against the eyes and the eyes are white. it'd just be a big blob of indistinguishable white.
05-20-2012, 01:32 PM
even if it sucks, at least i can die knowing i helped a little.
Thanked by: Previous, Crappy Blue Luigi, Garamonde, Medevenx, Zadaben
05-20-2012, 01:44 PM
those spectacles look a hell of a lot better, but i can't say i like what you did with the eyes. i want her eyes to be mostly closed, to give her a sort of "sly" or "devious" look.
how's this for a compromise?
05-22-2012, 05:33 PM
first post updated again, this time with a story synopsis! for your convenience, it's also right here.
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05-26-2012, 09:33 PM
this is it
I'm ready to kick faces Thanked by: Crappy Blue Luigi, recme, Shade, StarSock64, Zadaben, Mutsukki, Previous, Chris2Balls [:B], HandToeKnee, Medevenx, Garamonde, ~Axis~, Lexou Duck, Iceman404
05-26-2012, 10:07 PM
and then i made this
and NOBODY will know what it's for (except gors, hehe) Thanked by: Zadaben, Mutsukki, Previous, HandToeKnee, recme, Garamonde, Sengir, Lexou Duck, Iceman404
05-26-2012, 10:28 PM
I knew it!
Gors is secretly Mr. Z! Thanked by: Gors, Crappy Blue Luigi, recme, Garamonde, Lexou Duck, Iceman404
05-26-2012, 11:40 PM
okay i'm done, back to working on amber... Thanked by: Zadaben, Shade, Mutsukki, Marth, Previous, HandToeKnee, recme, Garamonde, Lexou Duck, Iceman404
06-14-2012, 08:17 PM
MY TOE MY TOE Thanked by: StarSock64, Sevenstitch, Virt, Tellis, alexmach1, Shade, recme, Gors, Bombshell93, Garamonde, Zac, Mutsukki, redblueyellow, Previous, Lexou Duck, Medevenx, Gaia, ~DrakoRero~, Jamuk, Iceman404
06-15-2012, 12:02 AM
I thought you were working on Amber?
Unless... she stole Crappy's clothes!!! And... mustache... Thanked by: Bombshell93
06-15-2012, 01:03 AM
because why not Thanked by: Bombshell93, alexmach1, Previous, Lexou Duck, Garamonde, Zadaben, Iceman404
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