Smash Bros. Story

[Makermatic21]

I've recently got back into writing my old Smash Bros. Story and should hopefully be done soon. While I won't give anything away just yet I do want everyone to know that it is a prequal that leads up to the Subspace Emisary story from Super Smash Bros. Brawl, so there may be a few spoilers for those of you who have yet not played it.

I've decided that once completed I will share a chapter a day with you all so that I can get some fresh opinions that aren't biased. I would like all of you to share all of your thoughts, ideas, questions, etc. honestly. Good or bad. There are 3 things I have in mind:

1) I would like to know if you all enjoy or hate my story.
2) If you all like it I want to share my orignal comic, flash ideas, and video game concepts.
3) If anyone has an interest in converting my ideas into a flash or video game feel free to PM me.

Thanks again for your time, I hope to see many responses to my story when I post it, and take care.

[Previous]

1. I hate it. Way too short.
2. Nothing wrong with sharing, I guess. Go ahead.
3. I'm always open for converting nothing into a flash video game. To be honest, that's what I do all day.


tl;dr: Posting content in thread is good, posting thread without content is bad. No need to make a topic before publishing your work here. What are we supposed to comment if there is nothing to comment on? All we cann do is complain about how there is nothing to complain about. Like I'm doing right now~

[Iceman404]

I lost all hope for this thread and story when I read the title

[Cheri]

Hello! I completely adore your story! The only moment I hate in it is when it ends abruptly and I have to wait for the continuations for what seems to be eternity. Please, write more of this story and be sure that you already have fans like me!

[Lexou Duck]

that's a pretty awesome bot