Mallow in:Mario & Luigi Inside Bowser's History(Battle)

[Goemar]

Sometimes a blank canvas is the best way to improve your work.

[Neo 5]

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I noticed that the belt is bad do not get angry.

Dear god dude.. Its not a marshmallow. Instead of splashing two white spots on the body and calling it a cloud, why don't you actually form it to more of a cloud-like appearance? If you're making the character, use any reference as possible to help you sprite the character. Here!

I have here what you asked (I delayed because I had to do homework).


[Mod Note: I put your signature image in spoiler tags because it was too large.]

[Neo 5]

and changed everything and now and miss the special power:

[Previous]

Instead of working on animations, try to get one frame right first.

Give him a proper shape. He's a cloud made out of bulbs. Make him puffy. For example, his cheeck should pop out at the side of his head.
Increase the contrast of your colours.
Rework the shading - instead of using your shade colour to outline the bulb parts, use it to actually give them some volume.
The left foot (closer to the viewer) looks like it is the wrong way around.

Your arm stretching animation makes it look like his arm isn't connected to his body at all, but a seperate piece. I'd also move it down a few pixels.
Moreover, when he jumps out of his pants, he should have a lower body and not be cut off.

I made a quick edit to illustrate a few things. Others may be able to help more.


Keep in mind I'm not familiar with neither the character not the style, though.

[Garamonde]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=igmHMljcNT0
0:14

[Neo 5]

Previous thanks for the sprite you've done but I would use the one I have now modified.

postscript these days eh not able to do anything because my family estavamos throwing a party.