Spinning Nights

[Britt]

First bit of spriting I've done in what seems like years now.



Normally I would wait until I have a near finished product to post anything, or atleast enough to critique, but I'm having a bout of trouble with the right leg (our left) and was wondering if anybody had any input on how I could go about fixing it.

[Virt]

Oh I thought this would be NiGHTS. Oh well.

I'd say to make his right food thicker. To balance out with the other leg, y'know?

[Neo 5]

it is only an outline and needs help. There should be the right leg in if not for things outside and longer arms (I speak from the bottom). but everything else is fine.

Just tell me if you need help.

[narcolepticd]

Idk if it's just me, but it looks like his arm is moving too fast for the axe animation.

[Gors]

what? what animation? what axe?

I suppose you're talking about Kopaka's sprite; pay attention to which topic you're responding.

[Britt]

Well while the topic is up here, might as well post progress.




Shrunk it up a bit, fixed the leg and started shading.
Ignore the bottom bit, thought I might try out some tiling as well.

[Thumbtacks]

Looks great!

Though I think I like the head of the first one better.

[Britt]

The first one is the newest one.

[Thumbtacks]

Oh.

Very good. Carry on then.