PROGRESSSomehow)
I think I'm about done.
I think I'm about done.
TSR Compo Vol.6 - CHOO CHOO! Here comes a steam train!
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PROGRESSSomehow)
I think I'm about done.
10-09-2012, 08:08 AM
Final? We'll see.
Figured a block of text couldn't hurt
10-09-2012, 01:31 PM
It's really great to see so many epic entries to this.
10-09-2012, 06:56 PM
Stitch: I have trouble reading the font. I would take out the "how do you keep finding me?" so you have room to make the font a little bit bigger. Also, the fact that the punctuation is bigger than the letters is a little distracting.
Thanked by: Garamonde, Sevenstitch, Keiang
10-10-2012, 09:25 AM
(This post was last modified: 10-10-2012, 09:26 AM by Sevenstitch.)
Yeah, that Text was wonky.
Sacrificed some dialogue for readability. Also gave the various number counters actual numbers.
10-11-2012, 06:18 PM
Thanked by: Keiang
10-11-2012, 07:41 PM
Thanked by: Crappy Blue Luigi, Keiang, Rosencrantz, Phaze
10-12-2012, 01:49 AM
I know I have no shot at winning with Keiang's amazing entry, so I just made something to try to grow as an artist, which is what this is all about, right?
10-12-2012, 04:43 PM
(10-12-2012, 01:49 AM)Natis Wrote: I know I have no shot at winning with Keiang's amazing entry, so I just made something to try to grow as an artist, which is what this is all about, right? Thanks for the compliment, but you shouldn't put yourself down like that. It really is all about improving. Also, I feel like I kind of had a leg up on the competition for this one, since I've actually had the concept for a semi-steampunk game sitting around in my head for a year or so, and ended up just spriting that. Thanked by: Garamonde
10-13-2012, 12:25 PM
I won't be able to make it, it has so many flaws, but was fun making. And it's totally unreadable cause the bg counts as a color from the palette, so yeah :/
10-13-2012, 01:39 PM
You could make the BG transparent.
10-14-2012, 05:10 AM
Well, competition is now over. Will put up the voting thread!
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