Dex's Dump

[Adam]

^ Alright. I'll get to fixing it. And they actually use their feet to peck holes in the eggs. No need to get into discussion about a made-up character, though!



Update on Silas' run thanks to some crit from Shawn.

[LeleleleMAXIMUM]

Arms larger than legs?

And more hair movement.

Other than that, great run cycle.

[Adam]

If you look closer in most of the frames they're pretty equal. Thanks though.



Here's a WIP mockup. Enemies are too static, but they're all I've gotten sprited so far, so deal with it :V

[Stirred Drei Ling]

That looks pretty cool and good Dex. But on one or two frames in his run where his right arm is back, you should probably shorten it a pixel if you haven't already.

Are those Cthulhu minions in the robes? Or just creatures wiith octopu heads?

[Adam]

Yeah, I'll work on that. Thanks.

[Adam]

Here's a new mockup. =D

[Cshad]

This one looks better
I feel the boney guy could stand to have a bit more yellow in his shades. I also feel that his helmet's color doesn't contrast to well with the bone color. He could also use a bit more contrast.
And the legs are awkwardly shaped in the falling pose.

[Adam]

Well I wrote a story but it's a bit too long to post here...

@Cshad, thanks, I tried to add some of your suggestions in, but I'm stuck with the legs on Silas...I changed them a tad, but I don't see the problem. The person who makes it normally can't :c I also added a bit more action to that one mockup and removed the other static enemy. Hopefully it helps :V

[CeeY]

Very nice work! But im not liking the lava, it's too bright.

[Adam]

Will darken, thanks for the c+c!

[Ragnarök]

There is too much contrast on the bird.

[Adam]

I'll have to disagree there. Maybe it's your monitor, because I've taken a lot of different color choices into consideration making the bird, and changing it now might be a bad idea. :/

[Adam]

Taking a break from everything else to make a PJ challenge entry. It's a good one for once, so I thought I'd enter, even if I started a tad late.

C+C?

[CeeY]

Looks good, but some dithering would really help.

[LeleleleMAXIMUM]

Hmm, it looks like you love tree bark texture.
Pretty good so far, but yeah, it's not looking like fur.