Dex's Dump

[Zern0]

Jeez, I've had way too much schoolwork lately to get much done



first one's ilkke inspired

The first one (With the Super Robot Killer) is my favorite one. Please, finish him

[Zeph]

i don't entirely agree with him, but i see what he means. the horizon is perfectly straight in all 3 of them for example.
basically you've got straight lines where you'd expect to see them, and curves where you'd expect to see them, but a lot of artistic value could be added by mixing it up a bit.

i normally find most landscapes are normally straight, save for mountains, which the third piece has

the second one's the ocean. duh

first one i'm actually going to round off because it's the moon, but yeah, thanks i guess

its not that big a deal, especially looking at each piece individually.
I just saw where he was coming from, and instead of jumping on his back like everyone else I thought I'd point out that he does in fact have a point.

But going with what you said at the end, you really wouldn't see the horizon of the moon as curved if you were standing on the surface. but if it was drawn curved you wouldn't really see that as wrong either. Same could be applied to either of the other pieces, or even an exaggerated curvature due to distorted perception, or perhaps a viewpoint that isn't perpendicular with the horizon.

[Adam]

Bottom one's too far into production to change. First one, sure. Second one's the ocean, which I feel like keeping as-is. Thanks everyone.

[triptych]

Bottom one's too far into production to change

this excuse is nearly as bad as "i only have mspaint"

being lazy is not a valid excuse to avoid changing something. it'll be much better if you take the time to fix a huge problem with it

[Adam]

a straight line really isn't a problem to be honest, he says a whole point of view change would be interesting which would be reworking the piece, which i'm not doing

i'll just take his advice and use it in future pieces !

[Adam]

http://pixeljoint.com/pixelart/40664.htm



Finished. Comments + favs appreciated.

[Phantom Killah]

Very nice

[King of Bad Posters]

Very impressive the clouds look soo real. Exelent Job. A ploos ploos

[Adam]

Thanks guys.

[CeeY]

Glad you finished, awesome job :]

[Chris2Balls [:B]]

http://pixeljoint.com/pixelart/40664.htm



Finished. Comments + favs appreciated.

You conveyed the depth of field very well, but I'm not too happy with the purple shape in front of the mountains.
Good job.

(I have 300 less posts than Dex heheheh)

[tsr moderation staff]

The tree seems to uniformly round.

[Adam]

eh, i can't really see it, but who knows

i'm not working on it again anyways...if you read my info at PJ you'd know that...

[Adam]

Changed the boy's face and shirt, removed sufficient amounts of dumb dithering from his shirt, his hair, and the monster

Oh, and refined stuff. I might have this finalized in the next MONTH, knowing school

[JarJar]

Good shit. I'm still not liking the monster's teeth and claws, looks sloppy and misshapen and his teeth stick out too much and doesn't seem connected to his mouth. Make them more even, sharper, and more under his lips. Other than that It's coming out nicely.