Some time before death

[Phantom Killah]

self portrait.
Still need to finish doing the hair and clean up the hat. Looking at it now, I think the ear might be too big as well. Any c+c would be appreciated

[Phantom Killah]

the other me. Well, one of the other me's.

[Previous]

The first one's right cheek (his right) looks kinda bland compared to the rest, it somehow seems to lack some defining shading. I feel like the second one's hat's left end (our left) should line up with the left end of the face more (the not-brim part). The ears look somewhat random and probably have too much detail going on compared to the whole.

Other than that, these look quite fantastics. I like your style.

[Phantom Killah]

All right, the gang's all here


I tried adding some more definition to the cheek, not sure how well it worked out. I'll work on the ears soon. My eyes (the first one) are kind of bugging me now.

Also, wow, I might actually look good in a fedora.

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edit::

fixed a bunch of stuff, looks better now

[Novally]

Are these the original sizes. Idk looks kind of scaled to me. Some parts of the shading should be smoothen out. Also Sherlock Holmes and Watson?

[Sengir]

The first one you made is missing an upper lip

[Phantom Killah]

They're not scaled, but I could definitely refine the shading.

Also Sherlock Holmes and Watson?

haha, nope, but that does make sense.

They're just some ghosts that haven't died yet
http://i.imgur.com/BlyKo.png


Sengir: might be part of why it looks off...I'll try adding more lip

[Phantom Killah]

Did a bunch of clean up and detail work

I think the first one looks a lot better now (and a lot more like me)

[Kirbyfan]

No more smile?

I think you had his right cheek/cheekbone better the first time you fixed it. That shading (2 pixels) looks a bit weird now. It makes the shape look weird next too his left.
If you could emulate the old cheek (fixed) with your newly-shaped face, I think it'd work out well.