Sonnet 504
So I'm writing a sonnet for school and I'm turning it in tomorrow I'm trying to give it a sort of Medieval mysterious sort of feel to it with the vocabulary and such, yet I feel as if I messed up a couple times on the syllable count or whatever a couple times. So any errors or room for improvement or what do you guys think? Also anyone wanna take a guess on what its about?
Corridors which they pass unsuspected.
Onward they press but oh low and behold.
Circles they walk motives undetected.
Ideas in mind when they creep they creep slow.
Not long ago more chances in sight.
Ask them I would if they seen what I seen.
Their gesture would stay unseen like the night.
Landing right on the goal felt like a dream.
The excitement it gave now mine to keep.
With time came the challenge more easily caught.
Coming to learn as you sow shall you reap.
Long gone is the rush and adrenaline we sought.
But continue we must walk in this group.
For what brought us together one single scoop.
So I'm writing a sonnet for school and I'm turning it in tomorrow I'm trying to give it a sort of Medieval mysterious sort of feel to it with the vocabulary and such, yet I feel as if I messed up a couple times on the syllable count or whatever a couple times. So any errors or room for improvement or what do you guys think? Also anyone wanna take a guess on what its about?
Corridors which they pass unsuspected.
Onward they press but oh low and behold.
Circles they walk motives undetected.
Ideas in mind when they creep they creep slow.
Not long ago more chances in sight.
Ask them I would if they seen what I seen.
Their gesture would stay unseen like the night.
Landing right on the goal felt like a dream.
The excitement it gave now mine to keep.
With time came the challenge more easily caught.
Coming to learn as you sow shall you reap.
Long gone is the rush and adrenaline we sought.
But continue we must walk in this group.
For what brought us together one single scoop.