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#16
09-22-2008, 03:32 PM
ok tx for advice =) here it is tell me wat u think[Image: slige5cr8.th.png][Image: thpix.gif]
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#17
09-22-2008, 04:01 PM
There are 2 things I noticed...

1: The outline at the bottom right looks jagged.
2: The outline shoud be a darker shade of green, not black.

Its ok. Keep trying.
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#18
09-22-2008, 04:04 PM
It's still too jagged.
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09-22-2008, 04:33 PM
ok, well i tryed working on the edges here it is [Image: slige6ku0.th.png][Image: thpix.gif]

thanx for giving advice guys =)
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[img][Image: piranhagd1.th.png][Image: thpix.gif][/img]

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#20
09-22-2008, 06:39 PM
The mouth is too bold. Dull it down a bit.
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09-22-2008, 06:48 PM (This post was last modified: 09-22-2008, 07:18 PM by BIG PIRANHA.)
i see this is wat i got [Image: slige7zy8.th.png][Image: thpix.gif]

thanks for the advice =)
ok i made the mouth opening faze i no the opening mouth needs some work but this is wat i got so far

[Image: slige8qj5.th.png][Image: thpix.gif]
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[img][Image: piranhagd1.th.png][Image: thpix.gif][/img]

my little version of a purple para piranha plant
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09-22-2008, 11:46 PM
(09-21-2008, 04:38 PM)gorsal Wrote: No teacher would say that to someone.

Lies, I've had some pretty bad teachers my friend.
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09-23-2008, 11:50 AM
(09-22-2008, 11:46 PM)TPoe Wrote:
(09-21-2008, 04:38 PM)gorsal Wrote: No teacher would say that to someone.

Lies, I've had some pretty bad teachers my friend.
whoa, that's messed up... I feel sorry for you... Sad

on-topic, you're certainly improving... that's good Smile

But try to keep its outline smoother. Also, his cheek shading doesn't work anymore, so try playing with it a bit.

Again, don't use line tool. It makes your sprite look bad. try making it more life-like. A bacteria isn't totally straight, you know.
His chin looks bigger in the second sprite. Make it smaller. Your chin doesn't grow when you open your mouth Smile Also, keep his details constant (your first sprite has 5 teeth showing, but your second sprite has 4. Did it lose its teeth when eating?)
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09-23-2008, 04:25 PM
ok, ive made a phew changes in its color. im still working on its shape,im trying to find a bacteria alagator type shape
but this is the change of color
[Image: slige9am5.th.png][Image: thpix.gif]
thanks for the advice =)
i love piranha plants Smile
[img][Image: piranhagd1.th.png][Image: thpix.gif][/img]

my little version of a purple para piranha plant
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#25
09-23-2008, 06:02 PM
(09-23-2008, 04:25 PM)BIG PIRANHA Wrote: Ok, Ive made a few changes in its color. I'm still working on its shape, I'm trying to find a bacteria alligator type shape but this is a change of color.
thanks for the advice =)
1. You don't need to thank us every post.
2. I doubt bacteria is alligator shaped so you shouldn't make it like that. The mouth looks weird when it opens. If it's supposed to look like a real bacteria you might need a picture referral like this, but if not, never mind.
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#26
09-23-2008, 06:21 PM
to make him look more like a bacteria [Image: slige10zc7.th.png][Image: thpix.gif]
does this look any better?
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[img][Image: piranhagd1.th.png][Image: thpix.gif][/img]

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#27
09-23-2008, 08:33 PM
I read the whole thing. I agree with most people that the edges are how you say? edgy... but i think it would look cool in a game! Shading is great and color works. Maybe try increasing eye size more?
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#28
09-23-2008, 10:58 PM
ok, ive changed it to a blue bacteria type color and have different possiblities of what it should look like
and i no i gota fix the mouth opening part.
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09-24-2008, 02:38 PM (This post was last modified: 09-24-2008, 03:09 PM by killme.)
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