RUNNING FOOL

[Phantom Killah]

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Hey people, I think I need some help.



I've got this character who is supposed to be a boulder (a big rock), but I've spent so much time with the character that I can't really tell if she actually reads as a rock or not, and I'm thinking probably she could stand to look more like a rock.

I'm having a hard time making her look more rock-like, so I'm looking for some tips on that and really just any critique on the character design or technical details.

Feel free to criticize the other two dudes too, but mostly right now I'm focusing on Dianne


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[Garamonde]

I think she looks like a rock, but the arms don't have shading and I dont understand them. Is she supposed to be a possessed rock?

[Phantom Killah]

Is she supposed to be a possessed rock?

Uh, yeah, kind of. The arms are like magic spirit energy or something

[Sevenstitch]

No need to gravel, I've got advice, but don't take it for granite

What type of stone is she made of? There are many colors and textures of stone.
Is the stone she is made of well-worn? The current stone has soft edges, very little sharp form, as if she has been eroded over time.
I'd suggest maybe looking at some stone examples, and perhaps giving her a rougher, more defined shape.

Take this with a grain of salt though, as I personally like Diane as she is

[Phantom Killah]

Tweaked Dianne a tiny bit. As long as she looks like a rock to everyone I think I'll leave her design alone for now.

Working on a guy now from a desert-based species descended from octopuses.


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[Phantom Killah]

Mon familia, in order from oldest to youngest




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[Gors]

i really like this, though i don't really like how the hair is rendered, considering how the face is very detailed

also the hair should cast a little more shading on some of these, no? in some of them ,it looks like the hair is just a piece of cloth on top of their heads

really cool though!

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also idk what's going with your neck

[Shade]

The one on the far right... Did you steal my little brother?

I also really like these!

[Garamonde]

Maybe you and PK are secretly related... Phantom Shade.

[Phantom Killah]

Yeah, I don't really like the hair all that much either. I think the main problem with it is that I'm lazy.

I'll get around to fixing it eventually



Oh, and as long as I'm posting pictures of my family, I might as well show this:

3 protagonists that are visually based on me and my two oldest siblings for an idea I have for a trio of related games (kind of like the zelda oracle games)


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[Phantom Killah]

POKEMON!!!!


PK's Kronies

Obviously very much a work in progress

[Helmo]

good jorb

I like the kermit the frog in the middle

[Phantom Killah]

Significantly upgraded Gonzalez (Hawlucha)

I really love the fully rotatable 3D models in the new games' pokedex, they're much better to work off of than official artwork

[FunnyStarRunner]

good jorb

I like the kermit the frog in the middle

With those shades, he's more like Koolmit the Frog.

Although the more I look at it the more it reminds me of "MS Paint Adventures".

[Phantom Killah]

Some progress (particularly on Volkov and Voorhees)


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