Supaman Edits

[supaman2525]

hello guys today i like to show u some custom sprite works i made that you will really like

now you guys remember the mmpr game for both snes and sega genesis
well i made an edit sprite sheet that was ripped by Belial the hedgehog,a edit portrait that was also ripped by Roket and edit by zaxis
heres my custom green ranger

did a reedit with the background & shading
so tell me wat you guys think of this

[Sketchasaurus]

Welcome to tVGR, I hope you find this place to be helpful in aiding you on your journey into the medium of spriting.

Firstly, the background color really interferes with the overall presentation of the sheet: I'd probably change it from green to perhaps a neutral light blue.
also, I can safely say that there's a huge difference between "customs" and "edits." The general consensus is that customs are sprites that are made 100% from scratch; by definition, these are edits. I'm not familiar with the style or the color palette of the game, but one thing that catches my immediate attention is how flat the gold sections look on the sprite, maybe additional shading could help rectify this issue, also drawing it with a little bit of perspective would fix it.

[supaman2525]

Welcome to tVGR, I hope you find this place to be helpful in aiding you on your journey into the medium of spriting.

Firstly, the background color really interferes with the overall presentation of the sheet: I'd probably change it from green to perhaps a neutral light blue.
also, I can safely say that there's a huge difference between "customs" and "edits." The general consensus is that customs are sprites that are made 100% from scratch; by definition, these are edits. I'm not familiar with the style or the color palette of the game, but one thing that catches my immediate attention is how flat the gold sections look on the sprite, maybe additional shading could help rectify this issue, also drawing it with a little bit of perspective would fix it.

Thank You For Your Great Advice And Tips Sketchasaurus your a good help and ill fix everything you pointed out

[supaman2525]

well i change & fix it up i think it still missing something but what ?

[SchAlternate]

One thing that I can certainly identify is that the outline of the golden pieces is way too dark compared to the outline of the whole body. Try making the inner outlines a yellow-brownish tone, as opposed to solid black.

[Garamonde]

I also see that there is banding on the gold parts, and not enough contrast in the shading.

If you are unsure of what these things are, then I strongly suggest you read over this.

[supaman2525]

thanx guys

[supaman2525]

ok the port is finally fix

[supaman2525]

now witness my green ranger comes to life in a new fan made mmpr bor game