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mmx style Jammer
#46
its not much this time just a new face


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#47
ok i decided that hes shulders is going to moving up and down when standing


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#48
well it is mmx so i thought hes shoude coulde dash


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#49
He should look more like he's breathing on his idle pose because I can barely tell that he does anything on it and his dash is weird how he somehow turns at a 90 degree angle.
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#50
robots dont breath but ill see what i can do,i tried fixing the dash thing


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#51
ok tried making it looking like his breathing now(couldt someone animate it so i can see how it looks?)


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#52
i just came too think,what to do with a sprite sheet when its done?
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#53
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#54
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Breathing animation

It looks more like he's shrugging than breathing. You're making his shoulders move, instead of making his chest contract and expand. You don't have to change the lineart much, just the shading. Example:
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#55
His shoulders go too high up, I think you should fix the shading like buttbutt said or remove the third, fourth, fifth, and sixth idle animations because it makes him look like he's shrugging too much.
[edit] I animated Jammer's punch and it needs one animation of it's fist coming out to puch.


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#56
im not sure its better or worse,also added extra colors just for fun
edit:thanks for telling me chdonga,tried fixing it


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#57
treid fixing the breathing alittle more(still not sure its better or worse)and added another colore


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#58
The throwing animation, the kicking animation seems so stiff. they need to be improved like the others.
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#59
ill see what i can do
edit: ok tried fixing both,not sure its better


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#60
sorry double post.
im kinda bord so made another colore


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