Attack on Smithy, sprite movie (not quiet sure where this goes)

[thylacine]

Hey I geuss my first impression was bad, but here goes my second. I am not quite sure where this would go but about 2 years ago I started a sprite movie series. It is called Attack on Smithy.

here is a link
I hope that worked. Please don't go saying the Smithy is not in this and the Swords name is exor, I know. Smithy is in the part I am working on now.

Hope you guys like this!

-thylacine

[Vipershark]

That was boring and had bad animation
skipped most of it

tl;dw

[thylacine]

Well I used bmp and Microsoft movie maker, what do you expect? I am going to remake it and make a sequil.
-thylacine

[GrooveMan.exe]

NOTHING to do with Projects. Putting it in creativity; although I have not watched the video.

[Rosencrantz]

I honestly couldn't tell what was going on, but I'll give you props

I was expecting a half-assed video with terrible animation and graphics (like this and this, for instance), but I can tell you not only put a lot of time into it, but you at LEAST payed attention to details. Kudos to you~

but yeah. The plot's relatively boring, and you need to pay more attention to grammar.

[thylacine]

What do you mean? I am not done with the series.
-thylacine

[Maxpphire]

Meaning don't make spelling mistakes and make the plot more exciting a bit in the beginning so more people get sucked in.

Also is it really necessary for you to put your username after every post you make?