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A Couple Jet the Hawk Sprites
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Question  10-19-2008, 03:25 AM (This post was last modified: 10-19-2008, 03:26 AM by SaturnGrl.)
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On his Air Board and holding his Crystal Cube Key
Just a couple right now. I'm not sure if I want to make more. Blank
Wanted to see what the spriters around here think of these edits.
If the reviews are good, I think I'll make more Jet edits. Genki ^_^
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10-19-2008, 07:47 AM
Even though they're edits, they're actually pretty good
I like them
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10-19-2008, 07:50 AM (This post was last modified: 10-19-2008, 07:50 AM by Flaxter.)
they are good,but i think maybe(only maybe)hes feathers(on the head)is a little smaller?
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10-19-2008, 05:23 PM
(10-19-2008, 07:47 AM)Vipershark Wrote: Even though they're edits, they're actually pretty good
I like them
Thanks! That's good to know. Genki ^_^

(10-19-2008, 07:50 AM)Flaxter Wrote: they are good,but i think maybe(only maybe)hes feathers(on the head)is a little smaller?
Hmm...actually I think the plumes on Jet's head are long enough to match Sonic's quills. But I'll research it further. Thanks!
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10-19-2008, 05:38 PM
Not bad, keep on it !
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10-20-2008, 01:12 AM
Cool. Looks like so far 3/4 voters like the sprites.
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10-20-2008, 02:30 AM
Very nice! I think you should continue with them.
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10-20-2008, 06:15 AM
There's something about his eyes that bug me...
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10-20-2008, 12:49 PM (This post was last modified: 10-20-2008, 12:53 PM by SaturnGrl.)
(10-20-2008, 06:15 AM)sba sb3002 Wrote: There's something about his eyes that bug me...

His eyes were a bit difficult to replicate due to the head size and all the details around them.
If you can point out any major flaws, that would be helpful.
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10-20-2008, 01:32 PM
Looks decent.
But I agree with sba, I think his left eye is too big in the second sprite.
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10-20-2008, 01:47 PM
I think it's because you edited it used Sonic. As you can see, they have different eye shapes.

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10-20-2008, 10:28 PM
Yes, Jet's eye more closely mimics Shadow's because of that "corner".
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10-21-2008, 06:02 AM (This post was last modified: 10-21-2008, 06:03 AM by Geo the Fox.)
....

...That, and Jet's eyes are sharper, around the corners. You can see more of a diagonally-upward point compared to Sonic's CURVE.

Oh, and I dislike your board edit. The Extremegear aren't flat.
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