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#1
11-09-2008, 05:44 PM
I've decided to make my game, When Worlds Collide, Into a comic, and I'm using Photo deluxe and Paint, so enjoy Comic #1

   

Note: The comic has the same storyline, just a different point of veiw from the game.

Another Note: CC Please
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11-09-2008, 06:04 PM
(11-09-2008, 05:44 PM)Perigi Wrote: I've decided to make my game, When Worlds Collide, Into a comic, and I'm using Photo deluxe and Paint, so enjoy Comic #1



Note: The comic has the same storyline, just a different point of veiw from the game.

Another Note: CC Please

Cool, kinda like a SMBZ comic, can you use Sonic Battle/Advance sprites? Or your trying to keep the same style, right?
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11-09-2008, 06:05 PM
Trying to keep it same style Smile , and I guess you could refer it to SMBZ, so far that is...
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11-09-2008, 06:13 PM
(11-09-2008, 06:05 PM)Perigi Wrote: Trying to keep it same style Smile , and I guess you could refer it to SMBZ, so far that is...

You should put this comic in your sig as well.
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11-09-2008, 06:35 PM
(11-09-2008, 06:13 PM)J-bit Wrote:
(11-09-2008, 06:05 PM)Perigi Wrote: Trying to keep it same style Smile , and I guess you could refer it to SMBZ, so far that is...

You should put this comic in your sig as well.

lol thnx, I forgot about my sig Big Grin
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#6
11-09-2008, 07:01 PM
There may be some people who enjoy random sprite-bashing with a crappy storyline as an excuse.

I guess I'm just not one of those people.

At least it's not eye-burning. Continue.
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#7
11-09-2008, 09:07 PM
people are gonna hate this one.
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#8
11-09-2008, 10:16 PM
It's too dark. I mean, it's TOO dark. it's a fiery wasteland right? It should be GLOWING RED!

Can't say much more. It's probably gonna end up horrible, especially considering how bland those text bubbles are, and the font for that matter, but... Let's wait and see.
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11-09-2008, 10:41 PM
And how lame it is.
OH SHIT, SHITS ON FIRE
OH SHIT, ITS MECHA SONIC
OH SHIT ITS SHADOW
OH SHIT LETS FIGHT
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This will be obnoxious. Make it interesting, not just battle after battle.
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#10
11-11-2008, 08:40 PM
Just realized you might have trouble with the style when the characters meet up.
That might be a struggler...
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#11
11-13-2008, 03:23 PM
Ungh

Why does J-bit's character looks so much like Omegas?

Anyways. It's not horrible. It's just the dialogue sounds corny and overused.
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#12
11-13-2008, 03:34 PM
Shadow - "Battle to the death?"

Read as : "Well, I've got nothing to live for."


Awful dialog, poor characterization, does nothing to try and get us involved in the story. Seriously, it's so damn dull.


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11-13-2008, 04:03 PM (This post was last modified: 11-13-2008, 04:03 PM by killme.)
Don't feel TOO bad...
Everybody hated my comic idea too...

It seems okay...
Maybe better dialogue...
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#14
11-13-2008, 06:56 PM
(11-13-2008, 03:23 PM)Rags Wrote: Ungh

Why does J-bit's character looks so much like Omegas?

Anyways. It's not horrible. It's just the dialogue sounds corny and overused.

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Yeah I noticed that too.. :/
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11-13-2008, 08:20 PM
(11-13-2008, 06:56 PM)Arthur Wrote:
(11-13-2008, 03:23 PM)Rags Wrote: Ungh

Why does J-bit's character looks so much like Omegas?

Anyways. It's not horrible. It's just the dialogue sounds corny and overused.

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Yeah I noticed that too.. :/

... So you want me to change it?
I can arrange that.
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