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11-24-2008, 02:13 AM (This post was last modified: 11-24-2008, 11:50 AM by Kitsu.)
I think I'm kinda late at getting into Phoenix Wright...

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The one on the right is "mine."
Anyway, this is a little something I'm working on to fill a request.

Please leave some C+C while you're here!
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11-24-2008, 06:53 AM
His Hand... doesn't look right, you know. Also, the hair annoys me.
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11-24-2008, 10:16 AM
Wait, the one on the left is yours... Or you made the right one?
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11-24-2008, 10:25 AM
(11-24-2008, 10:16 AM)Lucas Olivarde Wrote: Wait, the one on the left is yours... Or you made the right one?
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...The hair looks sloppy and layered over each other. It's also pretty stupid IMO, and not in a funny or cool way.

The hand... I'll let someone else deal with that, since I'm not good at hands either.

The left arm (our right) appears to have a misplaced elbow.

Too much shadow on the shoulder.

The rose looks flat.

The ear is odd, but someone else can crit that too.
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11-24-2008, 11:53 AM
(11-24-2008, 10:16 AM)Lucas Olivarde Wrote: Wait, the one on the left is yours... Or you made the right one?

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The other left, I guess...
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