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12-21-2008, 08:51 PM
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Thanks Lift.
I've added Fox and Jigglypuff btw. CnC everybody.
Also, I'm nearly done with Kirby!
Just needs some tweaking and more sheeting. So I made this preview of Kirby and an official stage!
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12-23-2008, 11:18 AM
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Awsome! Love the jigglypuff
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i like it. The lineart for Metaknight is pretty good.
Its like a scythe and a chainsaw! But put together! Brilliant!
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Thanks guys. I've updated the roster with the actual sprites to be used in the project and have fixed a few things with the other characters. CnC please.
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12-28-2008, 08:10 PM
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Cool, good luck
Can we see more of kirby?
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Thanks. Well, all of Kirby's attacks are done. Just needs the dodges, grabs, taunts, intros, wins, etc. I don't think I'll show more since I think it's enough. I might do a preview of Jigglypuff instead and a new stage. We'll work on it.
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Brand new update! Bowser is now officially added to the roster. He may need some tweaking, but IMO he is excellent! He just looks like Giga Bowser a bit.
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Meta knight needs to be completely redone and they all have way too many colours but overall, pretty good.
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Why does Meta Knight need to be completely redone? And they don't have too many colors, it's the style. Having 4 colors for each object's pallete.
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Mario's left (our right) hand looks too big, Pikachu is looking too far away from the screen.
But over all good.
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Very nice job on Bowser, but I'd think his legs need to be a little shorter.
I'll probably work on Ness when I get the chance.
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I'm going to redo Pikachu's stance. Also, I think we already have someone working on Ness. :/
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Wow! Nice job man! I really like these! I love the detail and design on Kirby, and really have no critism to give right now. Nice job!
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All of the poses look awkward and need to flow better. Case and point: Luigi and his oddly positioned and oriented hands/arms. Also, somehow his body faces perfectly towards the screen, while his head is at a perfect 90-degree angle to said screen: That doesn't look natural.
I will say, however: That is one of the best Game & Watches I've seen; just make his left wrist (the one to our right) stay still will moving his left hand (again, the one to our right) up one pixel-length.
I'd like to note that a good amount of the shading is pillowed, even though it's masked by the textures.
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http://209.85.12.234/11372/64/upload/p9985662.png
Basically what Omega said, but get rid of the black outline, I don't recall Brawl being cel-shaded.
As well as being awkward, the stances aren't recognisable :/.
I suggest you spend some time studying the character's animations, background, etc. and try and make them embody it: ie Bowser is strong, big, evil, imposing, so the animators gave him this animation which gives you the impression he's oozing power/strength, and hate/malice.
Hope it helps. This is a big project so good luck!
YOU HAVE TO FEEL WHAT YOU DRAW, FEEL