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That's awesome.
I frikking love scarfs.
I want to see more please.
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I love the idea of an attacking Scarf! I also love how well you pulled it off!
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Quite the size you got there.
Everything looks nice n' simple, g'luck! :>
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Get rid of the banding around the eye, and smoothen out some of the jagged lines. I know it's simple but you could still make it better. Overall this is an awesome project!
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12-24-2008, 11:57 AM
(This post was last modified: 12-24-2008, 12:00 PM by Codestar.)
Yeah I'm going to fix a lot of the issues with it, rest assured. This was just a sketch to use as a base for the pixelart. I do wonder what else I could add to the title screen to jazz it up a bit though. I'm open to any suggestions. I was thinking maybe an animated trail of fire at the bottom of the screen but I dunno...
Thanks for the c+c though. It's so weird seeing my pixelart on these library lcd's rather than my own crt monitor at home where I do most of the work...
damn me and my poor ass for not being able to afford an lcd...
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The scarf's movement doesn't make any sense. Either have it sit still or blow in the wind in one direction.
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Well see, I don't want to have a centralized wind direction in the game since there's going to be a lot of characters with scarves and other accessories with the same flowing property. So I'm keeping the scarf's movement dynamic depending on the character.
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It looks like the wind is blowing down. That doesn't make sense.
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It sways to the right a little too much.