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[Comics] OmegaWorks
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My first comic, Sonic Meets Megaman. A cross-over comic, featuring Sonic and Megaman, and several other video game characters. It also has a few fan-characters. It starts with dimensional anomolies in both worlds, and when Sonic and his friends go to investigate, they end up leaving their world.

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80-Rush Roadster


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It's been too long since this comic had an update.

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Chapter 1 Cover | 03-Uninvited Visitors | 04-Usefulness | 05-Forgetfulness | 06-Distractibility Factor 2 | 07-The Parachute | 08-You Take the High Road, and I'll Take the Low Road | 09-Sonic's Trip | 10-Tail's...Um...Loop? | 11-Sunny Side Up Eggs | 12-Return of the Potty Mouth! | 13-Knuckles is a Good Guardian | 14-Knuckles the Monkey | 15-Return to the Idiots | 16-Public Apology | 17-E-Tanks are for Wimps | 18-Fourth Wall'd | 19-They're Watching You...20-Mysterious Threats | 21-Nothing "Bad" Ever Happens | 22-Metal Gear Sonic | 23-The Mystical Moving Emeralds | 24-The Sucky Portal of Doom! | 25-Guess Who is Back? | 26-Just a Little Clarification | 27-The Arrival and The Departure | Chapter 1 Credits | Chapter 2 Cover | 28-Tripping Through the Rift | 29-Rift Tripping Explanations : Part One | 30-Rift Tripping Explanations : Part Two | 31-Rift Tripping Explanations : Part Three | 32-The Return | 33-What Goes Up, Must Come Down | 34-It's Okay! The Buster is Fine! | 35-"Suit"able Explanations | 36-Headaches | 37-The Game is not Over Yet | 38-A Wily Explanation | 39-Unknown Happenings | 40-One Way Ticket | 41-Murderous Islands | 42-Forte at his Best | 43-Forte Meets Samus | 44-Shooting is Fun! | 45-Energy Problems | 46-Luck Isn't His Forte | 47-Forte Lives! | 48-It's Right Under Your Nose | 49-Emeralds Found | 50-Ready To Go! | 51-Super Fun | 52-Windy Explanation | 53-Red vs Blue | 54-The Age Old Question | 55-Tails Hates The Readers | 56-Red vs Blue Continued | 57-Tails' Bright Idea | 58-Forte Ruins Something Else | 59-Forte Interrupts, With Help From Samus | 60-Interupting Things From Another Angle | 61-Freedom... Is A Bit Slower for Some | 62-Someone Needs Driving Lessons | Chapter 2 Credits | Chapter 3 Cover | 63-Another Letter | 64-Red, Crappy Planner? | 65-ShyGuys, Excellent Planners? | 66-ShyGuys, Not Good Secret Keepers | 67-Five Koopas, And One Plumber, With One Stone | 68-Shame Turtles Are So Slow... | 69-Back From Vacation | 70-A Surprise, Maybe? | 71-The Marks Are Still There | 72-It's a Skyboard Too | 73-Secret-Be-Gone! | 74-Attack of the Koopa Bros! | 75-Do YOU Know Sonic? | 76-Battle Formations Omega! | 77-Black Koopa Down | 78-Asking the Impossible | 79-Into The Abyss! | 80-Rush Roadster

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My second comic, The Mighty Omega. Mostly started due to the fact that I really like working with Genesis/Mega Drive style sprites. It's about the Sonic3 & Knuckles characters, the Archie Freedom Fighters, Mighty the Armadillo, and Omega the Hedgehog, living in New Knothole Forest Zone, on Angel Island. The main enemy is Dr. Robotnik (NOT EGGMAN!), and the only thing known in the story so far, is that Robotnik is planning something big, big enough to seriously scare the Freedom Fighters. I seriously was planning on Omega TH being the only fan-character in this, but on the very first page, people started asking me if they could cameo, so...

LATEST COMIC
92-Aquatic Ruins Zone


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Updates resume! =D

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01-The Not-So-Mighty Beggining | 02-Mightily Ignorant | 03-Mightily Urgent Information | 04-The Mighty Journey | 05-Mightily Obvious | 06-Mighty Makes Sense | 07-Omega In The Hidden palace! | 08-Some Mighty Distractions | 09-What To Do? | 10-Why Does It Do That? | 11-Say Wha? | 12-So That's Why He Asked... | 13-New Shoes Will Be Needed & 14-Murphy the Mind Reader | 15-Mushrooms Abound | 16-Mighty's Un-Helpful Plan | 17-No More Mushrooms! | 18-Meet Martin Prower | 19-Threats of Family | 20-Omega is Still Ignorant | 21-A Short Break | 22-No Breaks for Mighty | 23-Home Sweet Home | 24-No, You Still Don't Get to Know | 25-Tables Aren't That Important | 26-Yes, You Finally get to Know | 27-Knuckles' Plan | 28-He'd Do It, Too | 29-The Big Plan: Part One | 30-The Big Plan: Part Two | 31-Soldiers Marching Off | 32-A Brown Paper Package | 33-He's Arrogant, As Well As Ignorant | 34-Omega Is In Trouble | 35-Pans hurt | 36-Hugs Don't | 37-Mighty Has A Limited Choice | 38-Age Old Question, TMO Style | 39-LylatWars' Best Line | 40-Someone's Excited | 41-Casino Night Zone: Act 1 | 42-It's a one pilot plane | 43-Oil Ocean Zone: Act 1 | 44-Ice Cap Zone: Act 1 | 45-Green Hill Zone: Act 1 | 46-Casino Night Zone: Act 1.1 | 47-Oil Ocean Zone: Act 1.1 | 48-Green Hill Zone: Act 1.1 | 49-Ice Cap Zone: Act 1.1 |50-The Big Forkin' 50th Page | 51-Green Hill Zone: Act 0 | 52-Casino Night Zone: Act 1.2 | 53-Hill Top Zone: Act 1 | 54-Ice Cap Zone: Act 1.2 | 55-Green Hill Zone: Act 1.4 | 56-Casino Night Zone: Act 1.3 | 57-Hill Top Zone: Act 1.2 | 58-Green Hill Zone: Act 1.5 | 59-Ice Cap Zone: Act 1.3 | 60-Zone Hopping | 61-Green Hill Zone: Act 0.1 | 62-Green Hill Zone: Act 0.2 | 63-Hill Top Zone: Act 1.3 | 64-Ice Cap Zone: Act 1.4 | 65-Chemical Plant Zone: Act 1 | 66-Hill Top Zone: Act 1.4 | 67-Green Hill Zone: Act 1.5 | 68-Carnival Night Zone: Act 1 | 69-Omega's Past | 70-Green Hill Zone: Act 1.6 | 71-Omega's Bad Past | 72-Omega's Past: End 73-Emerald Hill Zone: Act 1.7 | 74-Emerald Hill Zone: Act 1 | 75-Hill Top Zone: Act 2 | 76-Green Hill Zone: Act 1.8 | 77-Carnival Night Zone: Act 1.2 | 78-Emerald Hill Zone: Act 1.2 | 79-Green Hill Zone: Act 2 | 80-Emerald Hill Zone: Act 1.3 | 81-Hill Top Zone: Act 2.2 | 82-Green Hill Zone: Act 2.1 | 83-Carnival Night Zone: Act 1.3 | 84-Emerald Hill Zone: Act 1.4 | 85-Hill Top Zone: Act 2.3 | 86-Carnival Night Zone: Act 1.4 | 87-Back At Knothole | 88-At The Bar | 89-Free Food | 90-The Tornado Returns! | 91-Small Fox Barricade | 92-Aquatic Ruins Zone
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You made 200 of these????

Oh man, looks like the constructive criticism reached you a bit late.

First of all, the Sonic Meets Mega Man one is full of clashing sprite styles, which are very off-putting to any comic.
Second of all, your fan characters seem really uninspired and have poor color palettes, as well as being badly shaded.
A lot of the things that characters say also seem to be a bit out-of-character, and some characters it's hard to find their personalities.
The text bubbles in some of them look okay, and pretty clean, but that's the only thing I can find interest in.

Anyway, I don't have the attention span or interest to read every issue, but it doesn't look like something that would be very interesting anyway.
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