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#31
12-30-2008, 05:22 PM (This post was last modified: 12-30-2008, 05:27 PM by Toad.)
Okey-Dokey then. Hair= Fixed
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#32
12-30-2008, 05:55 PM
make the sideburns bigger, the stache a bit longer and give him a definite ear. It's small right now.

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#33
12-30-2008, 05:58 PM
Yeah do what gorsal said and redo the legs.The actual hair looks good but fix the mustache and the sideburns.
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#34
12-30-2008, 05:59 PM
Ok, ill fix that tomorrow. Thanks.
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#35
12-30-2008, 06:37 PM
Also, make the hat a little rounder. It looks a little flat in the back. Base it off the hat in your avatar. See how it's taller?

You really made major improvements. I compared these to your old ones, and they are a LOT better.
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#36
12-31-2008, 02:58 PM (This post was last modified: 12-31-2008, 04:12 PM by Toad.)
OK, I am currently fixing all the things you said needed to be. Edit: Hat = Fixed, Sideburns + Ears = Bigger.
Whoops Fire Mario how did he get in there?
Edit: This one's better. Smile
Also, how do I make it so the sprites go in a row and play over and over repeatedly?
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#37
12-31-2008, 05:53 PM
Hey, is there any thing else wrong with my sprites?
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#38
12-31-2008, 06:02 PM
I didn't see the edit I'm so sorry but here's what I think.
Legs- bigger.
Fire Mario's left shirt strap-wider.
That's the only thing wrong I see apart from that your sprites have improve amazingly.
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#39
12-31-2008, 06:06 PM (This post was last modified: 12-31-2008, 06:12 PM by Toad.)
I made the legs bigger twice. I don't think one more time would make it better but I'll do it because you said so. Fixing the strap as well. Thanks Mabelma.
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#40
12-31-2008, 06:10 PM
Wait a second I forgot to tell you something only make the right leg a little bigger and make it go completely to the body.
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#41
12-31-2008, 06:12 PM
OK. Ill fix that tomorrow.
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#42
12-31-2008, 08:14 PM
Well, if you want to be "correct", then make Mario's legs a little longer, but if you're shooting for some sort of style, then keep them how they are.

As for the hat, I don't think it's round enough yet. It still looks flat.

And finally, Mario's back in the walking (mainly the sprite where he's turned fully sideways), it needs to be fatter. See, his back buckles in too much there and Mario is a fat guy, so it should pop out a little. I know in real life it wouldn't do that, but in Mario's world it does. AND, in fact, in the real world, the shirt would flow down at a 90 degree angle, so it would appear to be flatter that it is now. Just make it go out more...
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