A Lemony Sprite

[Vipershark]

back to the team SR part

if we do them, I'd like to take a crack at spriting them

[Lemon]

Sure, anyone can.

[Wes]

I tried my hand at a lineart for the mascot. But Briklin's is really good, and the only thing about the pose the could be changed from his to mine are the hands and squares. Mine' still 100% custom, and I will shade it differently and color it differently. but they are similar, I admit.

[Previous]

Not contibuting to the project...
but.
I met myself wearing a lemon hat.

[Ninspriterx]

I was pretty sure the mascot of tSR was Dazz.

Seriously, think about it.

[Lemon]

Well, there was that competition and stuff...
And Dazz seems OK with them...
Idk...

EpicWEs: Great! I really like how the mouth looks.

[~BRICKLIN~]

Done?

I've made a contribution to the site!

200th post w00t!

[Previous]

The lower part of the "S" should move upwards with the teeth and you may want to add a lower jaw, like EpicWes did.
Also, I don't like the red shade on the light blue part of the paintbrush.
The left side of the head ball thing could be smoothened, there are some bumps where you used a one pixel - two pixels - one pixel pattern and vice-versa.

[Wes]

Update on mine

[DarkKirby]

I like it, but it has to much squares.

[Tim]

I may actually take a shot at this, we'll see...

[Chris2Balls [:B]]

I've had a brainwave for this.* I'll see if I can do it though.
I was thinking of using EpicWes's or ~BRICKLIN~'s linearts, but the pose is a little boring =|




* I was going to take sprites from different games and stick it into the mascot's body, and then shade over it. It'll make a lot of crediting though :s

[~BRICKLIN~]

The lower part of the "S" should move upwards with the teeth and you may want to add a lower jaw, like EpicWes did.
Also, I don't like the red shade on the light blue part of the paintbrush.
The left side of the head ball thing could be smoothened, there are some bumps where you used a one pixel - two pixels - one pixel pattern and vice-versa.

Red on the blue part of the brush: It's not actually a blue part, it's just reflecting the blue. Same goes for red.
1p-2p-1p: It was the only way to make it round, but I'll add AA.
Thanks for the crits.

EDIT: I know this won't be used, but I wanted to post it anyways.

[Vipershark]

tbqh I don't like any of them because I personally don't like the character

but I have a question about it: Is it supposed to be red and blue? I was assuming it'd be a white-off white ball, the letters would be red, the gloves would be white, and the paint on the brush would be rainbow colored, as are the little pixels floating around him

but that's just me

[Omegakyogre]

I see that you were going for a metallic sheen, Bricklin, but it just doesn't work with that much contrast.