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01-28-2009, 11:22 AM
(This post was last modified: 01-28-2009, 11:25 AM by AgentLym.)
Not bad, Simona-King, but, a few suggestions:
Since he's a... "some-kind-of-fish-that-has-a-light-on-his-head", make the light-bulb-like thing brighter, like it's shining. Also, he needs to be wider, and his bottom lip needs to stick out farther. And, there seems to be something poking out from his eye on the right side... and he needs some more shading on his belly-tail area.
But, good start!
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And, I don't quite see what you're seeing, Shnaps, but if there's something there, I wanna fix it before I get too far into it! And, I'll see what I can do about his hair!
If anyone sees anything with the cape, feel free to let me know! And I'm gonna fix his... scarf thing. It looks too round.
Hm... until I figure out something to put here...
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01-28-2009, 11:34 AM
(This post was last modified: 01-28-2009, 11:36 AM by Jermungandr.)
@ville: I prefer the middle one myself, but you're right it's hard to say.
@Simona-King: My only problem at the moment is that he seems to be a bit stretched vertically. Maybe try making him a bit fatter?
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Thank you for your comments on this sprite AgentLym and Drshnaps.
Sweet Stuff is actually my favorite Boss from KDL2 (beside Dark Matter)
and I would like to fix and finish the sprites from Sweet Stuff. I'll make the other
Animations together with my Brother.
I think this whole sprite Project from us all will turn out great!
Can you put Sweet Stuff on the list and my name behind it Drshnaps?
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Hiya I decided i'd try to do chip from the Amazig Mirror but i have a question how do you post the image of your sprite on here?
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use potobucket or imageshack
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Okay, so, Kirby 64 didn't originally have a transformation sequence when Kirby used his Fridge ability (he was just Kirby one second and then BAM! Fridge.) But I thought I'd try making one anyways just for fun.
Imagine it animated a bit faster. This is as fast as my animator gets.
Also this:
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Ahh fridge kirby, you were invincible, could melee attack, and could heal yourself. Truly the ultimate of abilities.
Ahh fridge kirby.
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Drshnaps, are you going to combine all the different mix abilities to one sheet like what you did for the Advance style ones? (like Rock mixes, Ice mixes, etc.) or make an individual sheet for each mix?
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01-28-2009, 02:46 PM
(This post was last modified: 01-28-2009, 02:49 PM by Baegal.)
(01-28-2009, 02:08 PM)Drshnaps Wrote: Okay, so, Kirby 64 didn't originally have a transformation sequence when Kirby used his Fridge ability (he was just Kirby one second and then BAM! Fridge.) But I thought I'd try making one anyways just for fun.
Imagine it animated a bit faster. This is as fast as my animator gets.
Also this:
Awesome work on the kirby at the bottom
I never realized what it is, though..
Oh, and Shnaps, can you put my name under pon and con?
(01-28-2009, 10:58 AM)Simona-King Wrote: @GFK: This Sprite looks like he belongs into the game. Great work Green Fire Kirby!
Here is something I´m currently working on :
it´s Sweet Stuff from KDL2 and KDL3.
Any comments?
Looks good, but it's needs to be fatter and the light should shine brighter.
And, when you're completely done with this, could i edit it a little to make it in my sheet for one of adelines doodle? I'll be sure to credit you
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01-28-2009, 02:51 PM
(This post was last modified: 01-28-2009, 02:55 PM by Green Fire Kirby.)
I think I'm going to take the KA/NIDL Enemies because I've already started another one from the game and I'm planning to do two more. Speaking of which, what do you think of the Flamer so far?
Drshnaps: I like the Fridge Kirby a lot, the Curling Stone Kirby seems off to me for some reason though. I think it might be the top, but I'm not sure.
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@GFK: I like the Needlous, but Flamer was done before and I think that one was better:
(01-21-2009, 10:27 AM)Geo the Fox Wrote:
Colors pending.
This was done like a month ago. For something. And now i need it. For something else. I'm gonna be tackling a lot of enemies eventually...
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(01-28-2009, 02:46 PM)Baegal Wrote: (01-28-2009, 02:08 PM)Drshnaps Wrote: Okay, so, Kirby 64 didn't originally have a transformation sequence when Kirby used his Fridge ability (he was just Kirby one second and then BAM! Fridge.) But I thought I'd try making one anyways just for fun.
Imagine it animated a bit faster. This is as fast as my animator gets.
Also this:
It's a curling ball used during Curling matches...
Awesome work on the kirby at the bottom
I never realized what it is, though..
Oh, and Shnaps, can you put my name under pon and con?
(01-28-2009, 10:58 AM)Simona-King Wrote: @GFK: This Sprite looks like he belongs into the game. Great work Green Fire Kirby!
Here is something I´m currently working on :
it´s Sweet Stuff from KDL2 and KDL3.
Any comments?
Looks good, but it's needs to be fatter and the light should shine brighter.
And, when you're completely done with this, could i edit it a little to make it in my sheet for one of adelines doodle? I'll be sure to credit you
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I, for one, do not mind if he does a Flamer of his own.
Loving the fridge.
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