NINSTAR's W&WLRPGIII [Wario's Topic]

[Ragnarök]

Hey, np. I was just trying to make a statement whilst attempting the new fad.

[Tero]

I would hope I'm not ruining the style...

[Jalopes]

Looks fantastic so far! But something about the arms on the look-down pose is bugging me, like they're too rounded. It makes them look too big.



Something like this should fix that.

But this is awesome and I can't wait until it's done

[Star]

Hmm..I kinda want them to look pretty big though lol. Wario's got some muscle but I think I'll fix that minor problem in the future.



We are the champions, my friends!~
After a couple of hours, I FINALLY finished side walking. I think I deserve some sleep.
Could someone animate this, if they dont mind?

[BobbyLala]

animated

[Lemon]

The walking is smooth, but something bugs me about the twitch in the tache and eyebrows.

[Kao]

I kinda get the feeling that hes walking backwards

Looking good though.

[Croshi]

The twitch on the walking bugs me... maybe it should go down when his right arm goes foreward?

[Heinze]

eyesbrows and mustache... Just fix it, the rest of stuff is good ^^

[Kitsu]

I think the stache should go down whenever his feet hit the ground. That's kinda why it looks weird...

[Shouty]

The reason why it looks like he's going backwards is because the transition between these two frames need to be better, maybe the same when he brings his other foot foward. Other than that, it's coming along very well. I can't wait to see more.

[Jalopes]

The arms look weird on the walking, like they're growing. I think it's just the position they're in.
And what Shouty said about the walking.

Otherwise it's a pretty nice animation.

[Star]

Whew alot to quote..

animated

WOW, the animation came out alot better than I thought! :o Thanks, man.

The twitch on the walking bugs me... maybe it should go down when his right arm goes foreward?

It? What's it? His foot? And yeah, I noticed the twitching too.

I think the stache should go down whenever his feet hit the ground. That's kinda why it looks weird...

So should I make it bounce up then down?

The reason why it looks like he's going backwards is because the transition between these two frames need to be better, maybe the same when he brings his other foot foward. Other than that, it's coming along very well. I can't wait to see more.

Thank god it's only these 2 frames. They're the main problem.
And thank you. I just gotta fiqure out what to fix on these 2 frames...I think it's the feet.

The arms look weird on the walking, like they're growing. I think it's just the position they're in.
And what Shouty said about the walking.

Otherwise it's a pretty nice animation.

It's just the positions that they're in. The arms are fine to me. I think it's just the stache and those 2 frames'(that Shouty was talking about) feet that are the problem..
Im kinda clueless at the moment.

[Croshi]

I meant maybe his mustache should go down instead of up both ways, so its more fluentistic.

OR something

[Star]

I fixed that last frame to smoothen the animation and changed the stache.

(thank you sword for animating it ) Is it good now? I'm still getting some critisim on it..