Pikachu*

[blah475]

looks better really

[Kirbyfan]

Again, as I stated before, in the Idle Position, the ears are angled to far down. The should be more.....erect.

[Gollum]

Looks better than before, though the body (mostly the rear end) should move and ripple with the motions of the legs ans he runs.
This can be done with comparitive counter shading.

[Ninspriterx]

eh? eh?

[Koopaul]

Teddychu?

[Cshad]

Hmmm
Seems a bit too stylized, not enough resemblance to brawl, although it is adorable/fantastic
I'll see if I cant edit in a moment

[Kirbyfan]

Anything below the neck is too square (tail included).

[Gold]

eh? eh?

Doesn't look like Pikachu. :\

[Koopaul]

I think Pikachu should be more sideways. Anything with a tail should be more sideways.

[Teddy The Elite]

The arms aren't supposed to make him look like Super-chu. They're more like he's slumped down.

I know it's him sitting down, but he stands the same.

[Cshad]

This isn't spriting discussion
Help yourself help him help the site by editing some things that you think could be improved in the sprite~

[Teddy The Elite]

This isn't spriting discussion
Help yourself help him help the site by editing some things that you think could be improved in the sprite~

I would, but I sprite like my hand writing. It looks like I have Downs.

[Star]

I don't think you people understand what Nin is trying to do. He's posting "models" for us to work off from, just like the Peach topic.

I manipulated it a bit and I made this. I got lazy on the tail, pardon me for that lol.

[A.J. Nitro]

That looks good, but I wouldn't exactly call it perfect. I think its the feet that are bothering me. Try and make them look more like that ref you got there. And yes, the tail does need more work.

[Star]

Yeah, the feet were bothering me too. I'm not too sure on how I would make them. Just flat perhaps? Oh and any other problems? I think there may be a few..