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#31
05-19-2010, 09:43 PM
I barely notice it, but it's going to be one of those things that becomes apparent when it's fixed. But other than that, I love this. Possibly one of my favorites. It reminds me of the style for Mother Series in the fact that you can tell it's the same style as the rest of the project, but you can also see the influence of the original games' style in there too.
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#32
05-19-2010, 09:51 PM
Put him next to Link. How does he look?
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05-20-2010, 12:13 AM (This post was last modified: 05-20-2010, 12:15 AM by Kitsu.)
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Next to Link (with a few extra changes to his sword arm). I think with his sword pointing down like this, though, it almost looks like he's leaning on it or something...

So, some general observations:
- Marth looks a bit more realistic than Link, and less cartoony.
- The two are about the same height (if Link were to stand up all the way).
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#34
05-20-2010, 12:16 AM
Compared to Link, Marth's head looks WAY too small.
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#35
05-20-2010, 12:34 AM (This post was last modified: 05-20-2010, 01:23 AM by Kitsu.)
So, should I redo it, aiming for more cartoony proportions? Right now, his head is actually comparable to the size of Samus's head, but that's it; everyone else's head is bigger.

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I have a feeling I shouldn't have done the head with Link nearby at all.
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#36
05-20-2010, 01:27 AM
That head honestly looks a lot better, but now the body looks too small. ): Shrink the head like 1 pixel at most, maybe?
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#37
05-20-2010, 01:46 AM
Looking much better.
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#38
05-20-2010, 01:46 AM (This post was last modified: 05-20-2010, 01:47 AM by Kitsu.)
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1 = big, 2 = 1 pixel smaller
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#39
05-20-2010, 01:51 AM
I like 1.
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#40
05-20-2010, 02:00 AM
1 is better
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#41
05-20-2010, 02:32 AM
I like the smaller head. It doesn't overwhelm the body.
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#42
05-20-2010, 06:36 AM
Really likin' what you did so far. Throws mine out of the water. ;P

I'd have to go with 1 though. Something about the hair in that one just looks... nicer, and more true to Marth. Maybe that's just me in saying that?
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#43
05-20-2010, 10:14 AM
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I like 2, so, uh, I have 'em both again with shaded bodies. Also edited the hair for number 2 a bit.
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#44
05-20-2010, 10:21 AM
Should the sword not have an outline? Links one does.
Also, 2 is better.
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#45
05-20-2010, 10:32 AM
The sword doesn't have an outline because
1) Masked Man's sword doesn't have an outline (but that might not count, since it might be an energy sword or something...)
2) I like swords without outlines; they just seem to stand out more, plus many other games do it, too, like Kirby games and the like.

It's really just personal preference though, so if everyone else also wants outlines on the sword, I can do that.
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