The 1 Month, nothing to do Mabelma's Project

[Goemar]

In short: Everything.
Long version: Shading is really bad, look at jeans - they don't look like that... Shading is so bad it makes the line art quite hard to see - I just don't like it.

[Mabelma]

I tried fixing some more things from M. Jeans tell me what to fix.
Some of the highlights are clorox marks like the ones at the middle of the sprite.

[Goemar]

The outline is a big jaggy and they look like something from the 70s - don't know if that's your intent.

[Mabelma]

Yeah that's what I wanted it too look like. Is the shading good?

[Goemar]

The creases look highly odd, I would look at them a lot closer. Use anime as a reference, and see how the clothes crease etc.
Some nasty person also jizzed on them.

[Mabelma]

Thanks but what is jizzed and what is creases?

[Goemar]

Creases - none straight bits, you know, folds in the fabric etc.
Jizz is stuff that comes out of males when they are happy - google it.

[Mabelma]

Oh that's what you mean. LOL. I'll fix it. What's wrong with teh folds?

[Goemar]

To get folds like that someone would have to carefully do them by hands, they don't look natural.

[Bear Saxaphone]

Oh that's what you mean. LOL. I'll fix it. What's wrong with teh folds?

Whats wrong is that teh isn't a word, they need to be renamed the folds. They look way to jagged.

[Mabelma]

How can I make them look more natural Goemar? You know what I meant Paris.

[Goemar]

Look at real jeans. Simple.

[Mabelma]

OK I'll do that for tomorrow.I'm learning to 3d model.

[Mabelma]

Ok so Goemar I just put on a pair of jeans and noticed the folds. I'll make it look like that. I can't do anything right. Sorry. I'll post two things tomorrow.

[Mabelma]

Here's are the new things:


C+C please!