You confronted a Starman!

[DioShiba]

EDIT: to prevent confusion, this is not SMB sprite, It's Earthbound related.


Meh, I am not completely satisfied with it, right now I am trying to make a sheet with it.

Anyways, criticism please!

[theguy]

Here goes; It has banded shading, it hasn't got enough contrast, you didn't shade based on the shape... and that's it also the colours are... ok

[DioShiba]

Here goes; It has banded shading, it hasn't got enough contrast, you didn't shade based on the shape... and that's it also the colours are... ok

Like this?

Also added pallete

[Pik]

Less Pillowing, more Contrast, a better shape, and some hue shifting.


Stuff that's needed.

[DioShiba]

Less Pillowing, more Contrast, a better shape, and some hue shifting.


Stuff that's needed.

Got it, right now I am gonna take a break from spriting though, Now on my to do list.

[DioShiba]

Made new shape (In front view) just wan to be sure it is alright before I go in to detail, also ignore second pallete. (also I added crits on sheet for reminder)

[Wavey]

Bigger torso, plz, arms look too straight and edgy, make them smoother and curvy.

[Chdonga]

I don't see any thing bad about it... wait, don't Starmen have pointy heads, or is that just one kind of Starman?

[Wavey]

No they don't have pointy heads. :/

[Chdonga]

None of 'em? Hmph must be a different Starman I'm thinking of then...

BTW-Starman kicks ass!

[Pik]

Better. His body should be wider, and I like the second palette BTW.

Though it still needs more contrast.

[DioShiba]

Meh, still could use more contrast.... Also new pallette. (And yet I can barely tell if I shaded it good since it's a bit small)