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03-22-2009, 07:24 AM
(This post was last modified: 03-22-2009, 07:24 AM by Chris2Balls [:B].)
If the knight's got a frontal lightsource, I don't see why one arm is darker than the other. All the highlights should be put further forward and facing the lightsource. In your case it seems that the lightsource is extremely close to to the character and not that intense, but this is contradicted by the fact the highlight on the helmet is high and seemingly on the side.
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Nice. I think the blue one looks awesome. Make some other thing like maybe a knight in a horse.
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Bottom row, the shading on the top of the guys head should be smoother, and the Yellow you have used needs to be less bland.
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The yellow on the "Bee Guy"
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Better, now you may want to make most of the lineart smoother rather than strait and jagged.
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