Ah! So you do keep a journal!

[triptych]

alright

not sure who im going to do after ewen but i know i want to get one more in here just because i dont like the number 7


edit:

GRANDMA WHAT A BIG




TURBAN YOU HAVE

[Emma]

dsgkjhfgkh i penelo. so much.

but aren't her trousers, y'know... baggier than that? they kinda poof out.

[triptych]

not in 1up world they dont

they look exactly like that









exactly
seriously though i could have made them bigger

i probably will later

[Chris2Balls [:B]]

Looking good
Alcid's right thigh (our left) seems too far out, and makes it look like he has a wide pelvis, which makes him look effeminate. I think you should move his thigh in a bit. His legs seem to hint that he is leaning on the left leg, but when you take in count the torso, it seems like it is the right. I think you want to convey an element of stability/aplomb to this character, so it is essential that you make him stable.

[triptych]

y/n

[Chris2Balls [:B]]

That's already better.

[triptych]

decided messing with ewen's palette and now i can't decide which one to use






help

me

[mozzy]

I think the one on the left works better.

[Solink]

the first one is better IMO

[Kaj]

First one has better contrast and matches the style's vividness a bit more I think.

[Gors]

I don't know, but the new character (Ewen?) looks awfully off-balance. It looks all twisted and unnatural. Also, you could make their facial features more noticeable.

[Kaj]

I'm not sure, but I think he's supposed to leaning against an invisible wall.

[Clear]

like nice stuff 1up, you've sure gotten pretty good over time

[Mecha]

wait people said my legs looked like yours?! I WISH Your style is awesome!