It's clubba-rin' time! (bad pun)

[Kaj]

It's been a while since I posted here, anyway, I need some C+C on this please :B.



Custom Clubba for a Mario beat-em'-up fangame project that I'm starting. I haven't even started on his club yet. It's not in any real existing style, at least none that I know of.

[Torres.]

I like it, the lineart and shading, it looks like a pokemon. The "Hair" thing looks cut and paste it is not on the head enough

[Kaj]

Tried to play with the palette a bit. I also but black lines on the inside. I think it fits the style anyway.

Really wish I could get some comments....

[Torres.]

I like the first pallette more, and I did give you a comment.

[Kaj]

Yeah, sorry, I was busy posting. Didn't realize that someone had posted. Also, I think the first palette just doesn't have enough contrast. That's why I decided to change it.

[Torres.]

Well, that is your decision but, still listen to the hair problem.

[Kaj]

Yeah, I'll try to see if I can fix that. Also, Photobucket must be screwed up at the moment or something, cause it's not displaying my images.

-edit-

Alright, it's working again.

[Kaj]

Tried messing with the hair, but I couldn't get it to look the way I wanted, so instead I focused on the club.



I think I'm going to start on walking animations now.

[Hinako Yoshitora]

I think the old palette was better... it's a cute sprite though~