Saki Kazami(original character by me) WIP

[Kaolla Su]

I think there is a something little weird......
I try to fix it, but it still looks weird...

Can somebody point that weird place?

sheet:


CG picture:

[Caergrim]

I think it looks great, but there are two weird places.

1: The right arm looks deformed. I recommend changing it so that it is held in a boxer's stance while jabbing. You could reference Muhammad Ali because he had a tendency to keep his hands at his side as opposed to his face.
2: The left leg should not buckle in during the punch. It should bend in the other direction somewhat.

Aside from these two criticisms, I think it is awesome!

[Heinze]

No it isn't great...
you recolored the hair and didn't run of the original style, the CG Art have a strange coloring, and the lineart isn't that great...

And Caergrim, nothing is great when you have these errors that you said... .-.

[Woppet*]

how long are her legs?

[Kosheh]

Twice the size of her torso according to the ref. :o