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05-06-2009, 10:46 PM
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Well, I'm obviously new here so I figured I'd introduce myself by sharing with you a WIP. This is my first edit so don't be too hard on me. I wasn't shure if I was supposed to put in the smash bros project so I put here because it's a WIP and I've never submitted before.
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(05-06-2009, 10:46 PM)Roy Kirby Wrote: Well, I'm obviously new here so I figured I'd introduce myself by sharing with you a WIP. This is my first edit so don't be too hard on me. I wasn't shure if I was supposed to put in the smash bros project so I put here because it's a WIP and I've never submitted before.
![[Image: promork.png]](http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/8477/promork.png)
cool but what is the red stuff on his head? Its not good to you gray outline for a red color, try changing the gray outline to a darker red color.
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Cool. I'll try that. It's gonna take a while to do that. I wish I'd had that advice sooner.
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(05-06-2009, 11:06 PM)Roy Kirby Wrote: Cool. I'll try that. It's gonna take a while to do that. I wish I'd had that advice sooner.
No its simple just take a paint bucket in any program and fill in the gray outline of the red with a draker red colour.
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I know, it just takes a while. I'm working on it now.
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(05-06-2009, 11:03 PM)Mega_Virus Wrote: (05-06-2009, 10:46 PM)Roy Kirby Wrote: Well, I'm obviously new here so I figured I'd introduce myself by sharing with you a WIP. This is my first edit so don't be too hard on me. I wasn't shure if I was supposed to put in the smash bros project so I put here because it's a WIP and I've never submitted before.
![[Image: promork.png]](http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/8477/promork.png)
cool but what is the red stuff on his head? Its not good to you gray outline for a red color, try changing the gray outline to a darker red color.
In most countries that would be called hair.
Anyhow, his hair/"red stuff on his head" looks out of style for some reason, maybe re outline it?
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05-07-2009, 05:04 PM
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The outline of his hair should be the same color as the rest of the outline of his body.
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05-07-2009, 10:49 PM
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I don't know, the red looks better to me. I've been editing it and it looks more natural. Plus, if you pay attention in kirby games, his hats don't always have a black outline.
Sorry to double post but, UPDATE!
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(05-07-2009, 10:49 PM)Roy Kirby Wrote: I don't know, the red looks better to me. I've been editing it and it looks more natural. Plus, if you pay attention in kirby games, his hats don't always have a black outline.
Sorry to double post but, UPDATE!
![[Image: promork.png]](http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/8477/promork.png)
I'll have you know that kirby doesn't have a black outline either, it's just somewhat dark.
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Well, it's kind of hard to tell the difference. You have to look real closely to see that it's not black.
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Kirby's outline, or the hair outline? Kirby's outline is a dark shade of something and the hair is outlined in a dark red.
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His hair looks terribly resized. The outline colour just randomly stops and starts at curves and the shading is almost like bad anti-aliasing. I suggest redoing the hair or making it look more like hair by not making it blocky.
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Hmm... I can try. I'm terrible at shading.
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Well thne keep on practicing. Just not doing something because you are bad at it won't make you better.