Dolphin and Magnus 2.0 M&L style with new and improved X-Nauts!

[Elebit]

I don't see a difference that much, but maybe take out the highlight on the tail (for the jumping)??

[CeeY]

The highlight is the point of light. And I updated the sheet. Now all is left is overworld. I changed the thread's name to Mario series enimies/allies because im planning on doing Bully's next.

[Miles07]

The dolphin's better than before now. Great job!

[CeeY]

The dolphin's better than before now. Great job!

Thanks Miles, I will do overworld later, right now Im getting started on the Bullies.

[Pik]

More contrast one the white, but pretty nice. You've improved

Also, the jumping poses need work.

[CeeY]

Ok I added more contrast on the white, and improved the jumping

[CeeY]

Ok seriously, I improved everything, and put it in submission form, notice how I only have one overworld, because I will do that later. Anyway, here is the latest sheet.

[Elebit]

More poses for Idle, like tail moving or blinking, and for the hurt maybe like it's fins go up and the mouth opens?? Overworld is also facing all directions though.

You have improved a lot too, great job.

[CeeY]

More poses for Idle, like tail moving or blinking, and for the hurt maybe like it's fins go up and the mouth opens?? Overworld is also facing all directions though.

You have improved a lot too, great job.

Thanks, for idle there are only two poses, as well as overworld goes I will finish the rest of the poses later. Hurt is done, I updated the sheet, and I changed my mind, the next characters I will be doing is allies/enemies from SM64, Super Mario Sunshine, and Super Mario Galaxy, so stick to this thread.

[CeeY]

I improved the sheet, and it is ready for submission! Here it is

[Elebit]

Make hurt like its hurt...

For ex:
Make flipper lift up
Change the eye(it looks wierd)

[Yak]

Good Job CoolYoshi, these are much better than before!

[CeeY]

Make hurt like its hurt...

For ex:
Make flipper lift up
Change the eye(it looks wierd)

Ok he actually looks hurt now, and I finished the sheet. The next thing I am doing is the X-Nauts from Paper Mario 2 The Thousand year Door. Here is the final sheet
And the Icon, what do you think is the icon good or should it be improved.

[Elebit]

Hurt is better But are you going to add overworld.

[CeeY]

Hurt is better But are you going to add overworld.

Actually this is overworld, Dolphins only move left and right. I finished, so next is the X-Nauts.