1up KOF2k Styled Portrait, take 2

[triptych]

MIDNIGHT FORTY
NEED TO GET SOME SLEEP
DONT WANT TO

AW FUCK

[Black Sax]

I dont really like the shading on the shirt how it is in small horizantal lines and the outsie of the sweater is a bit jagged in my opinion, but besides those things this is amazing.

[tsr moderation staff]

I loved the old one and this one looks even better so far. Keep it up.
Black Sax- not only are you looking at the old one, but most of the flaws you pointed out are part of KOF style.

[Black Sax]

I dont really think jagged jackets are parts of any style, but I understand the shading part, sorry. On the new one there is not much I can comment on but good job.

[triptych]

small update

i'll start the eye eventually





hair sucks, inb4 comments on that

[Gors]

Start the eye eventually? How? The hair's pretty much covering the eye area. I think you should remove a bit of hair to make it. I don't know about this style, but I think it uses thinner hair portions when shading.

[Sol]

Other than the hair, which you're already aware of, I can't see anything wrong with it at this point.

[PrettyNier]

The hair seems a bit too low, in my opinion. Other then that I really like how the hair looks ):

But anyway. The head should be a little higher up, and the neck thinner and slightly longer. Also, more defined shadows under the chin would be cool imo

[des]

im waiting to see this finished :V

[triptych]

MORE SMALL UPDATE GET

ive been busy today

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I HATE THE FACE

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CAPS LOCK

[tsr moderation staff]

I think his nose is too round, he looks kinda dopey

[Black Sax]

Yeah, his nose is oddly shaped, and the mouth is a teensy bit too long.

[des]

neck is wayy to huge bro

either make the head bigger or it smaller