Chloe Valens, ToE style

[halfangelfreak]

This is the project I'm going to work on for a while, just for practice.

Everyone's favorite Tales of Legedia character, Chloe Valens.

[Gors]

hmm, her face looks messy: there are a lot of stray pixels there. Some of the colors clash, principally red. I think it should be paler so it goes well with other colors. Also, some parts, especially the legs, are jaggy.

The way she swings the sword is unnatural and the motion blur could be better; Antialiase it and remove the outlines.

[halfangelfreak]

*I'm going to do the animation again, looking at ToL, it's completely wrong.*

Anyway, does this look better?

[Cobalt Blue]

that blade looks way too jagged. unless its a schimitar.