JUS character, should i continue?

[Gwen]

white hair it is, skin is optional, and clothing is defintitally black outlined, i'll make the legs longer, but the torso wont be any shorter or else its fucked up, should have results soon.
edit:here we go.

[Alex]

I think you should go for a darker white as the current white sticks out way too much IMO. I think you could make the legs a little longer.

[Gwen]

i increased the leg length by 5 pixels though, cant have him lookin like a gook, and JUS style is very brightly and vibrantly colored.

[Khrene Cleaver]

Much better, but I still stand on the outline and hair thing but I'm not gonna try to argue about a style I've never seen. One little thing though: Never use pure black or pure whit in sprites.

[Gwen]

JUS doest that with their shading alot, they use pure black, but i mess up on that every time so i use something close to black, and the whites not a big deal to me.

[Kurai]

i used gaara's colors actually, and those were his clothes color, also i looked at gaara as a reference for the stance, and he had barely any shading on the clothes either, soo idk lol.
ps: Damn, how does Rokkoh kiriyami sound?

It's a common mistake but Japanese contains no single consonants other than "n". Rokkou Kiriyami would be about right(the double k is allowed as it is an extension of the "ko") Also, is his first name Rokkou? The Japanese put family name first and personal name after, hence Uchiha Sasuke, Son Goku ect.

My only critique is, basically the same as all the above, make his legs a bit longer, thicken out his arm, and lessen the contrast for the white streaks.

Keep it up.

[Gwen]

his arms are average JUS thickness though. look at hiei's god he's anorexic.

[Gwen]

update, made the sword, need help or advice on making the ne and se positions for it though.

[Codestar]

Much better, but I still stand on the outline and hair thing but I'm not gonna try to argue about a style I've never seen. One little thing though: Never use pure black or pure whit in sprites.

pure black and pure white are used in sprites all the time...

[Gwen]

nevermind, i got the sword.

[Raytheon]

thats hardly JUS style.

[LeleleleMAXIMUM]

The white highlights really hurt it. It's like he used white hair dye. The shading is bad, but then again JUS style tends to have crappy shading. The design is like Sai from Naruto with different hair and colors. And the pose doesn't look battle-ready.

Where the hell is Tuna Unleashed, he should know.

[Gwen]

thats not the battle pose, he'll have a battle pose, and if you guys dont like the style, dont pu it down for those who like it, because its a good style.
also raytheon, explain how this isnt JUS even though all those before seem to know it is.

[LeleleleMAXIMUM]

So does this character have white strands of hair?

[Vipershark]

yes
look at his avatar
it's the same person