Ness sheet finally complete! Ready for submission

[Pik]

That was mine, but-

Yes, the effects were flashy in mine, but, Ness and his animations were really bad

[CeeY]

Yours is really good! But I personally like Pik's Ness better! Not because Pik is my friend, but because his is more detailed, and it looks more dynamic. But yours is great!

[Naruto[NU]]

Yours is really good! But I personally like Pik's Ness better! Not because Pik is my friend, but because his is more detailed, and it looks more dynamic. But yours is great!

thanks everyone. Pik check ur pms. Also i have to fix some stuff, (pk fire and foward tilt)

[Naruto[NU]]

I remade the pk fire, i think its good if i do say so myself. I added multiple frames, and made the sparks on his fingers.




I also fixed the foward tilt.



Comments on both?

I also updated the sheet, please use this one:

[Cshad]

That is a very unatural pk fire. Im pretty sure he throws his arms back a bit, but not to the point where he is basically touching the ground both ways :/

[Wes]

On PK fire, he should lean back less and his arms should be straighter when forward. Not completely horizontal, but not at a 45 degree angle like what you have now. somewhere in between would be better.

[Naruto[NU]]

That is a very unatural pk fire. Im pretty sure he throws his arms back a bit, but not to the point where he is basically touching the ground both ways :/

...yes he does touch the ground both ways....

On PK fire, he should lean back less and his arms should be straighter when forward. Not completely horizontal, but not at a 45 degree angle like what you have now. somewhere in between would be better.

once again, his arms arnt straight:



I know you guys are just trying to help, but I got it covered

[Bane84]

It still needs the Duck and DTilt at least. Just out of curiosity, how come you left those out?

[Desert Cat]

Wow I had no idea Ness has such balance!

[Pik]

By the way, you could just reuse the PK Starstorm animation for his down taunt.


But that'll be sorta cheap. :P

[Lotos]

I thought you looked familiar. The Lucas sheet is yours too. They're both beautiful sheets. I can't wait for Porky

[gun_man]

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I remade the pk fire, i think its good if i do say so myself. I added multiple frames, and made the sparks on his fingers.




I also fixed the foward tilt.



Comments on both?

I also updated the sheet, please use this one:

yo its me from mg your sheet is awsome but his face looks strange on the up smash with the yoyo

[Corporal Tom]

When will you finish Lucas?

[ShinobiX]

Dued these are really good, but the almost look like edited sprites from that kid NEKU or somthin in Jump Ultimate Stars

[Naruto[NU]]

Dued these are really good, but the almost look like edited sprites from that kid NEKU or somthin in Jump Ultimate Stars

well yes actually, but i only used him for the stance, run, and jump. (i think)

everything else is absolutely 100% custom. heres the proof. http://youtube.com/watch?v=OdeIi8HBdRM

anyways you can scratch the stance off that list cause of this:
WOOT! EPIC NESS UPDATE! (I decided i'm not finishing until i've completed everything.

First off, while I was looking over the sheet, I realized that for most of his attacks I used brawl pics as a reference. this resulted in them all turing out with ness on his side. (I like it like that). After looking at the stance I thought it was wierd that most of the attacks had him turned to the side, but the stance diddnt. Thus, I CREATED A NEW STANCE!!! Its only 1 frame right now, but tell me if you like it better then the old one.



And I finally made his crouch!

Crouch:

Crouching:

Getting up:

Next is the down tilt. So, what do you think?