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Yeah, spread the wheels out a bit.
And the tires look a bit too thick; maybe make the hubcaps just a hair larger to fit the tires better.
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Do the tires look good?
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Definitely. Maybe try making both shades of orange used on the hubcaps a little brighter; they look too dull right now.
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Should I change the seat cover's also?
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11-23-2009, 01:39 AM
(This post was last modified: 11-23-2009, 01:40 AM by Rhyme.)
Great. I think the tires hubcaps need to be a bit either brighter or larger. (Expand the tires by 2 pixels, hubcap by 1?) Making good progress, though.
edit: lol, inafter post. I think the seat's fine unless you're following some style that only lets you have a set amount of colors in your pallette, which you aren't.
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(11-23-2009, 01:37 AM)zwb147 Wrote: Should I change the seat cover's also?
Just make the darker shade of orange on the seat a little brighter.
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11-23-2009, 01:47 AM
(This post was last modified: 11-23-2009, 01:48 AM by zwb147.)
Larger Wheels' Hubcaps, and a brighter orange.
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Looks real nice! I can't think of anything else on it that needs changing.
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Two Down! I'll do the Cargo(Super Smash Bros. Brawl) next.
Its the one next to the Old Banana Ship.
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Cool. That one looks like it'll be a nice challenge.
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11-23-2009, 02:16 AM
(This post was last modified: 11-23-2009, 02:19 AM by zwb147.)
Ok the first thing you will notice is the lack of the Black Zigzag.
In the first post I said that I wouldn't put character emblems on so that people could put their own, do you think the Black Zigzag(Which I think is supposed to be Wario's Moustache) counts as an emblem. If not I'll put it on.
By the way, I couldn't find a decent picture with the back of the cargo so it may be off.
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11-23-2009, 02:28 AM
(This post was last modified: 11-23-2009, 02:28 AM by Stooben.)
There's a picture
here that's a little larger and shows a bit more of the cargo. I think that claw in the back with the pink hook could be put onto the kart.
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I thought it would get in the way of the taller drivers (really only Petey Piranha and Bleck but still) but I can do that!
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If you put it far enough back on the kart, it should get in the way too much.
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(11-23-2009, 02:33 AM)Stooben Rooben Wrote: If you put it far enough back on the kart, it shouldn't get in the way too much.
fixed typo
Anyway added the arm and it most likely wont get in the way. Anything else?