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just some stuff, probably for a project. Thanks to wolf for part of the koopa
Peach's face totally sucks, but I can't quite pin down what's wrong with it...

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walk cycle. No arm movement yet.
I'm no good at animations. Anyone mind giving me some serious C&C with these?

All WIP.

C&C would be lovely~
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Toad's jacket could be a bit less wonky, but its something of like 1 pixel so in the end its a completely minor detail.

also, all the characters are posing in a relaxed stance (like this /| ) while the koopa is in a more stiff, almost legless one. is that intentional?
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(11-02-2009, 04:29 PM)DigiTamer Metaru Wrote: Toad's jacket could be a bit less wonky, but its something of like 1 pixel so in the end its a completely minor detail.

also, all the characters are posing in a relaxed stance (like this /| ) while the koopa is in a more stiff, almost legless one. is that intentional?

Ahh, thank you for pointing that out. I'll get onto fixing that soon.
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#4
Updated with a couple things.

Out of curiosity, does it take something in particular to get feedback around this place?

Or do I just have to be a really good spriter?
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#5
not really, just depends on how interesting the project is. Some get a lot of feedback, while others go unnoticed. It happens.
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don't take it as something personal. just keep updating the thread and feedback will be given when necesary.
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#7
Very cool!
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So I tried a walk cycle.

But it just doesn't look right...
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#9
It would be good if you show it to us, maybe we can help you.
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(11-07-2009, 08:10 PM)Alcala Wrote: It would be good if you show it to us, maybe we can help you.

hmm? It's in the first post.
here is it again:
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(11-07-2009, 08:51 PM)Fez Wrote:
(11-07-2009, 08:10 PM)Alcala Wrote: It would be good if you show it to us, maybe we can help you.

hmm? It's in the first post.
here is it again:
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Sorry didn't saw that maybe if the arms move a little bit.
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#12
Arm movement will come.
I'm focusing on the legs for now though.
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#13
yeah, now that you mentione it he does a little hop while he walks.
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#14
Mario should hop twice in the leg cycle. Also, make the legs more defined, and not like noodles.

It looks good overall, gj Smile
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#15
you should change the koopa's shading to make it more orange
right now it look a bit weird
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