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RE: TUGS - Round 2 - Beginner WIP Thread - GrooveMan.exe - 09-28-2010
He doesn't have his right eye damaged or covered, it's terrible!
jk. I also like the top one more, but the placing of the mouth feels odd.
Edit:
![[Image: 9Pe7T.png]](http://imgur.com/9Pe7T.png)
Unless anyone wants to give up a nugget of advice as to how to improve this; this'll be my final entry.
RE: TUGS - Round 2 - Beginner WIP Thread - Nindo - 09-28-2010
His right shoulder (viewer's left) does not look quite right, its giving a bit of lightsource confliction with the rest of the piece.
I've not had any experience shading metal, so I'm not sure what advice I can give to correct that, but it just doesn't look right with this attempt to give his shoulder depth and keep the same lightsource.
RE: TUGS - Round 2 - Beginner WIP Thread - GrooveMan.exe - 09-28-2010
![[Image: nctob.png]](http://imgur.com/nctob.png)
Whoop, corrected.
Edit:
Whoop, nevermind, even better one:
![[Image: lwwZO.png]](http://imgur.com/lwwZO.png)
RE: TUGS - Round 2 - Beginner WIP Thread - FRET - 09-28-2010
The left part of his chin/cheeks (his right) looks lumpy and awkward
RE: TUGS - Round 2 - Beginner WIP Thread - GrooveMan.exe - 09-28-2010
Can you circle it? I must have been staring at it too long; I don't really see what you mean.
RE: TUGS - Round 2 - Beginner WIP Thread - Phantom Killah - 09-28-2010
![[Image: kDk9g.png]](http://imgur.com/kDk9g.png)
aye think we be finished, cap'n
RE: TUGS - Round 2 - Beginner WIP Thread - Baegal - 09-28-2010
the only thing i'd suggest is that you add a shine or something to his space helmet so it looks like he's actually in the helmet
RE: TUGS - Round 2 - Beginner WIP Thread - Phantom Killah - 09-28-2010
(09-28-2010, 06:43 PM)Baegal Wrote: the only thing i'd suggest is that you add a shine or something to his space helmet so it looks like he's actually in the helmet
actually tried that a while ago and then scrapped the idea. Might try again if I get around to it before the deadline
RE: TUGS - Round 2 - Beginner WIP Thread - S-Cpu - 09-29-2010
I think I'm pretty much done.
![[Image: tugsround2fin.png]](http://img80.imageshack.us/img80/6430/tugsround2fin.png)
Couldn't really think of any background, so...
But yeah, As I said, I'm probably done now.
RE: TUGS - Round 2 - Beginner WIP Thread - BobbyLala - 09-29-2010
finished.
![[Image: samuraifinal1.png]](http://img836.imageshack.us/img836/2038/samuraifinal1.png)
post something tomguycott!
i don't wanna win by default again (if i win, that is...)
(...i will)