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#1
12-21-2008, 11:40 AM (This post was last modified: 12-23-2008, 05:46 AM by Zabi.)
Hey there c:
[Image: onepiecemn3.png]
WIP
Some C&C would be nice.
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#2
12-21-2008, 12:07 PM
erm... it's Gomu Gomu >_>

very smooth shading you've got there. Just don't make his body stiff like you have in the lineart.
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#3
12-21-2008, 12:17 PM
The smile looks crooked, but that is probably what you were trying to do. I love the shading on the inside of the hat. Smile
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#4
12-21-2008, 12:18 PM
His hair goes down a bit more, but otherwise good job.
I'll think of something to add later then.
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#5
12-21-2008, 03:23 PM (This post was last modified: 12-22-2008, 12:10 PM by Zabi.)
Thanks for the comments Smile
[Image: monkeydluffyab2.png]
Update, I fixed the smile and made some better pose.
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#6
12-22-2008, 12:09 PM
Sorry for double post.
Finished Luffy and started Zoro.
[Image: estws7.png]
I tried to do something about the boring leg pose, but I can't do this right. It would have made it worse.
Spriting these guys is quite fun Genki ^_^
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#7
12-22-2008, 12:13 PM
Not bad, keep it up!
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#8
12-23-2008, 05:46 AM
Update:
[Image: onepiecemn3.png]
Man, this guy is really tough...
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#9
12-23-2008, 02:01 PM (This post was last modified: 12-23-2008, 02:12 PM by Naruto Namikaze.)
Looks good
but Zolo is too short and Ruffys' feet look strange.
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#10
12-23-2008, 02:06 PM
really too lazy to do an edit right now, but you could make these a lot better if you started shading to show depth instead of just shading to

shade

you've sort of got a gradient style thing right now and it's taking a lot away from the piece
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#11
12-23-2008, 02:17 PM (This post was last modified: 12-23-2008, 03:34 PM by Zabi.)
yea, you're right, especially the clothes look kinda flat :/
I'll try to fix that and edit this post later.
Until then, I'll show you the finished Zoro:
[Image: showwc6.png]

edited the image. 1 is old, 2 is new.
I hope I didn't overdo it...
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#12
12-23-2008, 03:41 PM
IMO the Second Zoro is better than the first cause his shading is better.
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#13
12-23-2008, 05:37 PM
I'll just deal with Luffy. Good start, but I would suggest removing the highlight on the hat, that part contrasts with your apparent lightsource. Also, the clothes seem far too stiff, try adding wrinkles.
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