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#16
Maybe make his head a tiny bit bigger. I mean one or two pixels, that's all.
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#17
The legs of the leftmost frame look a tad bit long, the rest looks good.
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#18
MUCH better. As Noloe sugested, you should make the width and hieght of his head larger by 1 pixel.
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#19
Olimar would look better with a bigger head; it's his biggest feature after all

also you could make the outline of his helmet white
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#21
I hopefully finished Olimar:
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And this isn't very impressive, but
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#22
i'm just motivated to make pikmins too C:
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#23
(04-13-2010, 05:06 PM)SengirDev Wrote: I hopefully finished Olimar:
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And this isn't very impressive, but
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Sad to say, the shape of Olimar's head is horrible.
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#24
on the other hand, i think it fits perfectly with the rest of the pikmins.
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#25
your original olimar was better, imo.
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#26
Simplistic but yet smooth. I liked how you had the head before though.
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#27
I think it has to be so
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#28
One day I looked at my style and it reminded me of FF, so I made a Black Mage.
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#29
I like it so far. The eyes could be either thicker or shorter (I think shorter looks better) and you can bring them closer together. The tip of the hat looks bent, I'm not sure if you were going for that effect. The cloak around the neck looks odd to me, but I can't say why exactly.
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