Pokemon Pink

[tsr moderation staff]

I just looked at the progress sheet, and there's a Sandslash already on there... It's in the same pose, but looking epic.

I know, I made it. I was trying to improve it.

[Chris2Balls [:B]]

There's Primeape
I eyeballed a Mitsuhiro Arita illustration for that (Team Rocket Deck, Bad Primeape)
I'm sure I can do more to it, and I'll need to find the dimensions for the sprite.

[NarutoGlowbal123]

Awesome Primeape, but XG hasn't been on so much so she might not like see it, but its awesome overall.

[Wes]

XG is a boy.

Also, the primape is good, but the pose is boring. he's just standing there. For a fighting type pokemon, he should be punching or something. Also, the hands and feet look too small and blend together a bit witht he way you have it positioned.

[NarutoGlowbal123]

Lol, I thought he was a girl because or his avatar ...

[Wes]

http://www.spriters-resource.com/communi...ile&uid=85

profile says his sex is male.

[Chris2Balls [:B]]

That's what I thought when doing the pose. I'll try and work on something. Thanks for the advice and comments!

[Hoeloe]

I just looked at the progress sheet, and there's a Sandslash already on there... It's in the same pose, but looking epic.

I know, I made it. I was trying to improve it.

I think Sandslash looks better how it is already, I'd leave it.

Also, the spriting quality on Primape is fantastic, though the pose is a little boring, as has been already said. With that quality of spriting, that will look amazing.

[Chris2Balls [:B]]

Thanks for the compliments

Okay, changed the pose but not happy with it =|
What do you think?

[Hoeloe]

I like it, but I think he needs bigger hands & feet and thicker arms & legs...

[Chris2Balls [:B]]

Okay. Will fix that.
There you go:

I'm not so sure about the cross now =|

[X Gamer 66]

I tried fixing Tauros's leg by making it smaller to seem as though its further back. I redid Marowak's arm and head, both turned out really well IMO. I wasn't sure what to do with Dewgong and Snorlax, though.

Golem looks really nice so far, only real problem is our right foot, which is unnaturally twisted to far toward the screen, and a bit small. Otherwise, it's great.

Tauros looks awesome too, I'd say just make his tails a pinch longer and our rightmost leg a bit thicker.

Snorlax also is quite nice. The top of his back seems a little too highly raised and pointed. Also, I like the "Zzz"s, but considering the sprite would be flipped in its profile, I think it might be a good idea to remove them. Still looking great though.

Love Marowak, I don't see any problems.

Basically everything from Dewgong's "waist" down looks really off. Its tail is thin, its tail fin looks really sketchy, and its smaller fins look a bit too small.

Excellent stuff overall, though.

Lesse, I couldn't really get the swirl right, so I left a blank one, although idk, maybe one of the 2 are alright.

Edit- Dang, I just realised someone did Poliwag and that they couldn't get a pic in the first post. Oh well, sorry to have wasted your time.

Nah, you're good. Yours looks quite awesome, so I'd be glad to use yours, at least until the old one is posted and we can compare them.

Still doesn't seem quite right to me.

I'm thinking our right leg (more specifically, perhaps the right foot) is the main problem still. Definitely improving though.

Heh I saw too. No offense to Tuna but the one on the sheet is better.
EDIT: Okay, I made some last-minute changes to Dragonite (all I did was tweak the wings and change the shading a bit), but it's great, AND fits inside the max. dimensions. Oh, and Chris, sure. The Primeape's untaken so give it a shot .

Lineart's good, its a good pose, but its wings and the lines along the belly look sketchy and good use some AA touch-ups, and it's also way overhsaded. It's certainly coming along very well, though.

Okay. Will fix that.
There you go:

I'm not so sure about the cross now =|

Everything looks great, but its hands and feet need to be a lot bigger. Also, the body may look better with slightly more shading. Otherwise, it's awesome.


Sorry for general inactivity on my part, I'll try to set aside some time tomorrow so I can update the list.

[Hoeloe]

Heh I saw too. No offense to Tuna but the one on the sheet is better.
EDIT: Okay, I made some last-minute changes to Dragonite (all I did was tweak the wings and change the shading a bit), but it's great, AND fits inside the max. dimensions. Oh, and Chris, sure. The Primeape's untaken so give it a shot .

Lineart's good, its a good pose, but its wings and the lines along the belly look sketchy and good use some AA touch-ups, and it's also way overhsaded. It's certainly coming along very well, though.

Heh, overshading seems to be a thing I keep doing. I'll have to work on cutting it down
AA was done in about 30 seconds, I wasn't really intending that Dragonite as a final version, but was just touching up what I thought was wrong with it, I'll edit it how you said though, see how it turns out.

EDIT: Ok, hows this? Fixed everything you said (to some degree at least) and added more muscle to the wings.

[NarutoGlowbal123]

Lol that's really good, but if you make the wing too sharp at the edge it'll ruin the sprite .

[Chris2Balls [:B]]

I think that the shading is badly applied on the tail, and that the AAing should go on the outside. I find that the sprite looks flaky (because of the latter AAing I was talking about) and that you should try and make it bigger. I also suggest some shading underneath the rings of the belly would look good. Here's an edit, it's not perfect but could put you on the right tracks: