New Pokémon Platform Project [Check Page 4]

[isael-21]

Ash is really rare, just look at this picture where he has legs:

The Lower Legs are shorter than the upper legs, that's why I did Ash Sprite that way, that is the most similar I could do it, so you tell me.

[Gors]

well, fix him then. The original art is looking awkward.

[Ton]

It might also be the angle he's being shown from.

[isael-21]

I fixed it:

Moved the knee's shadows up and now it seems equal. Just that.

if I fixed the problem, I'll try to delete those black outlines and make a change (like I said, if the problem is gone)

Peace*

[Ton]

The arms are still too short though. Stand up and see how long your arms are.

[Vipershark]

the arms need to be around 50 to 75 percent longer

[isael-21]

Arms outstretched:

Better if they were closer to the hip, but don't know if it's better.

Peace again*

[Vipershark]

a little bit longer.

edit- his hands should be roughly halfway between his waist and his knees

[isael-21]

Done. I edited his arms and drew his hands closer to hips:

But didn't convince myself, I know something's wrong in the arms form.

Peace again again

[StarSock64]

They're kinda like wiggly noodles, they need joints. Also, the legs still need to be longer.

I do like this member's effort and actual interest so far, though

[Cobalt Blue]

protip: try to make that exact same pose and see if it feels natural or not. use a mirror for better results.

if not, try to make a pose that actually feels natural and translate it into your sprite(or a new sprite, for the sake of using the knowledge on something new instead)

[Gors]

protip 2: you don't need to write 'peace' in every post you do, this isn't a letter that is going to be replied 7 days after you posted it. If you continue 'peace'-ing your posts, it'll get boring quickly and only annoy the people reading them.

[Maneko]

The feet doesn't seem to be supporting his weight at all. More than standing, he looks as if he were floating instead.

[isael-21]

Fixed or not, you tell:

Arms fixed, I think. Legs outstreched.

Hope it's better now

Bye (and sorry if that "peace" bothered you =()

[Sengir]

There's too many black in-lines and the shading looks flat.

Here, look at this: