Kirby Comic

[ElectroMan]

It's actually something that I've done long time, so the quality is "meh".

Don't worry, later comics get better. Hope you like them. Updated whenever

[Comix]

Is it supposed to be funny?

[Jelda]

I don't get it.

[GoldenX]

Things to improve:

Needs more humour

Get better fonts from here: http://www.blambot.com/fonts.shtml (the one you're using is too bland) I recommend "Acme Secret Agent" for comics (It's available on the website mentioned in my post.)

[Rakia]

Comics are supposed to have a punchline.
Also coloured text boxes =X

[Chdonga]

It was fairly laughable... it could be better. I like the colored, shaded text boxes though.

[Zee]

Typos, no punchline, colored font, and a lack of effort put into it.

Frankly why do people post comics that they know aren't good with the promise that they'll get better? Frankly, it just smacks of a worthless use of time.

On another note, Chdonga... do you try to fly in the face of popular opinion or is your ass-patting an attempt to raise that rep of yours?

[ElectroMan]

lol. I wasn't very funny at the time. Sorry for wasting everybodies time...

However, if you want to see the rest, I am hosting my comic here

If I have time I will improve the old ones... again, sorry for bothering you

[PrettyNier]

but
none of them are funny

[Maxpphire]

That and eating Mentos and Coke won't explode your stomach. You'll throw up soda foam however so it is perfectly safe to eat and drink that but you'll make a mess of yourself.

[ElectroMan]

Well, actually someone died drinking Soda and Mentos. It came on the news and everything

[Maxpphire]

He must have had some of the mentos stuck in his throat or something. Otherwise you'd just throw up foam. Something had to have cause his esophagus to be closed otherwise that pressure would just come up.

My science teacher did it in the room once to prove some kid wrong who said that and he just threw up foam.

[Alpha Six]

that's








retarded

[Maxpphire]

My school teachers are special.

It was good in a way that he didn't have to do any work for the rest of class too however he finally stopped with the foam after a minute or so. It didn't last too long but we had a discussion afterwards on why that happens.

[ElectroMan]

that's retarded

OK! I know you all think it sux! Instead of posting hate posts, give me tips!

I already have the comic fonts and I am keeping the speech bubbles. More advice??