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Koopaul's Mario Sprites (Help Needed)
#31
I'll see what I can do guys. Thanks a lot!
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#32
also you could make mario bend a bit over forward because it would look more relaxed
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#33
I don't how to change Mario's mustache to make it look more like him. What do you guys suggest? Also I've changed Yoshi and Peach according to these new dimensions.

[Image: mariofamily.png]

I can't do Peach's face... It's really hard!
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#34
Maybe one or two pixels larger on the stache? Just try it.
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#35
Okay guys these need a lot of work.

[Image: mariofamily.png]

The princesses look really bad. So does Toad. Any advice?

Also, just so you know I plan on having 10 "playable" characters heheh. So I need to fix these guys before moving on.
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#36
Their(Princesses) eyes seem a tad too big, mainly the pupils. especially on Daisy.
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#37
Toad's cap looks too high on his head that it should be. The cap may also be a bit tall.
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#38
Maybe, I just don't want Toad to be too small so he can be "playable" in the same environments as the other characters.
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#39
(02-01-2012, 01:31 AM)Koopaul Wrote: Okay guys these need a lot of work.

[Image: mariofamily.png]

The princesses look really bad. So does Toad. Any advice?

Also, just so you know I plan on having 10 "playable" characters heheh. So I need to fix these guys before moving on.
Mario & Luigi's body bases are solid. Again, move their faces towards the center a couple pixels, as I think their faces face way too far to the side for their body angle.

Toad's face is also not properly aligned with his body. Move his face to the center a few pixels, maybe a bit more than Mario & Luigi. On the issue of size, you could stand to shrink him a pixel or two, couldn't hurt.

Peach seems fine overall. Personally, I would reduce the size of her eye a pixel.

Yoshi is fine overall, but you could add some white on the bottom of his tail.

Daisy needs some more work. I suggest using Peach as a base, as Daisy's current design really is just an edited Peach. Remember that Daisy's cheeks are somewhat more pronounced than Peach's(That is to say, chubbier).
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#40
Don't have too much crit,

just gonna say that I liked your Mario cards' colors a lot and that you should use them.
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#41
(02-01-2012, 05:55 PM)Sengir Wrote: Don't have too much crit,

just gonna say that I liked your Mario cards' colors a lot and that you should use them.
I thought he was already using that pallette? Either way, I also agree that the card pallette works.
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#42
Card colors? Can you tell me what you two are referring to?
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#43
It looks like daisy's hair could be a little more pointier, but that could just be me.

Also, those two pixels of shading above toad's eye make him look like he's not sure or confident of what he's doing. He is also the only one who doesn't seem to be smiling
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(02-01-2012, 11:15 PM)Mighty Jetters Wrote: Card colors? Can you tell me what you two are referring to?

http://koopaul.deviantart.com/gallery/338905
#45
Holy crap, those are radular!
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