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You might want to give her torse a few pixels on the right (our left), it's really flat and lacking a back.
Hue shifting wouldn't be too bad, either (especially for yellow).
Paulas arms are of different length.
The skin tones have barely any contrast.
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There's a few jaggies on the eyes and clothing
Try increasing the contrast, make the colors a little less blinding
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I don't know if it's because I'm on my phone or not, but those both look extremely pillow shaded
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I think it's because the light source is a little wonky. It's hard for me to pinpoint where it's coming from.
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So much banding it ends looking like pillowshading.