Novally's Sprite Thread (C+C needed!)*

[Novally]

Hahaha. What's up RnR

[Mr. Jam]

never mind, just a glare on my computer... it just sort of looked as if the shine on the eyes blended with the rest of the mushroom at that time, but I guess I was wrong... sorry

[Novally]

I added a Boota sprite. Boota is a pig mole from Gurren Lagann. He is usually hanging out in the cleavage of Yoko (the girl in my avatar)

[Hoeloe]

Boota is lacking contrast a little, making his sunglasses kind of hard to see. I'd try making his fur a little lighter, but other than that I think it's good.

Especially since, you know, Gurren Lagann sprites are pretty much instant win in my book.

[Novally]

I had a feeling his fur was too dark and he lacked contrast. I'll try to fix this.

[~Axis~]

Not that it's a problem, but it would be nice to post edits and new sprites in new posts so we don't have to go back to the 1st page just to see them. Just a suggestion.

[Novally]

Lmao, because I thought putting them in the first page would be easier for everyone hahaha. I'll put them in new post and edit the original then.

[Novally]

The things wrong that I see is the balloon's outline. I'll fix that tomorrow when I get out of class. I hate college so much... The mushroom's outline will be fixed as well.

[Shade]

The mushrooms look messy to me. I would remove one or two colors and play with the shading a little bit.

[Gors]

you use way too much selout for the sprites. Try a simpler outlining in order to make it less messy.

[Vipershark]

Yeah, there's way too much sel-out.
On the P-balloon in particular, the P is basicaly unreadable because the selout makes the sprite so busy that everything just looks garbled.

Also the eyes on the fire flower are off-center to the right by about a pixel, but that may have been intentional.

[Novally]

The mushrooms look messy to me. I would remove one or two colors and play with the shading a little bit.

Working on this right now. Thank you.

you use way too much selout for the sprites. Try a simpler outlining in order to make it less messy.

I am doing this right now, thank you.

Yeah, there's way too much sel-out.
On the P-balloon in particular, the P is basicaly unreadable because the selout makes the sprite so busy that everything just looks garbled.

Also the eyes on the fire flower are off-center to the right by about a pixel, but that may have been intentional.

That wasn't intentional. I will be fixing these sprites right now.

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[Vipershark]

Is it possible to increase the contrast between the P and the yellow of the balloon?

They sorta blend together and the P is hard to see.

[Novally]

There should be a way to do it. It's getting difficult. I was going to outline the P like it was in SMW for the GBA. I'll have to make it wider though.

[Novally]

EDIT/Update:
C+C I guess lol. There isn't much to comment on. I am still cleaning up the pixels.

Newly added! Jan 31st

Alright guys. Before I show you these. I must ask for no C+C on these two drawings. I don't care about them as a drawing at all really. It's not that I don't like C+C, it's just these were pretty much rushed down to get used as a base. It's like giving critique to a blank canvas. These will be turned into sprites, Capcom vs SNK style. So I'll need to C+C to begin as soon as move towards the actual spriting part.

Image One:

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The things wrong with this is:

-That his shirt looks stiff. As soon as I work on this the shirt will look much softer and I have all the great artists on here to guide me through the way.

- He has no hands, this is because I suck at drawing hands, so I am going to either take pre-drawn hands or work on the hands when I'm at the line art portion (which is most-likely to happen).

- One leg is shorter than the other, again I will fix this when I'm on the line art portion.


Image Two:

Spoiler

- that sad mouth