Bombergirl [PLAYABLE CHARACTER]

[Chris2Balls [:B]]

Adding capes.

[Garamonde]

Why does she jump forward when she sits down when in the sprite boxes she actually goes a little backward? Just wondering.

Also, uhh, sorry about lack of contribution, I've kinda been enjoying my time off from school a bit too much and have been doing other things @___@

I will definitely start something today at least and maybe have it up in a day or two.

[Chris2Balls [:B]]

Oh yeah, that's because I put the idle before the other frames and I hadn't centred it.

Progress. I'll be posting gifs too

Idle:
Walk Forwards:
Walk Backwards:
Back Punch:
Back Kick:
Duck:
Punc (1&2):

[Garamonde]

The walk looks too jerky. It's supposed to look kind of like she's merrily skipping, so I think it needs more varied frame delays.

By the way, I ended up staying home today so I finished her character select portrait sketch:



It's really rough and probably has some problems but hopefully it's clear enough for you to work with

[Chris2Balls [:B]]

I tried changing the frame speeds for the walk, I updated the back punch attack.

Here's a WIP of the large portrait, too:

[E-Man]

Considering how Bombgirl looks drawn in that style, maybe it could be used as a concept of an evil counterpart of Mighty?

[Kosheh]

Actually I know it's a rough mockup ATM, but could you perhaps base Bombergirl's face off like, Irene or Jolyene, even? So it like...looks a little more uh, softer and young adultish?
I'd also suggest keeping art of her in the JoJo style with a closed mouth - otherwise, you'll have a really rash, spooky character.




Currently she kinda has a...Maleficent face going on, lol

[Garamonde]

Considering how Bombgirl looks drawn in that style, maybe it could be used as a concept of an evil counterpart of Mighty?

I actually did that before I even joined TSR

it was rejected

[Chris2Balls [:B]]

Actually I know it's a rough mockup ATM, but could you perhaps base Bombergirl's face off like, Irene or Jolyene, even? So it like...looks a little more uh, softer and young adultish?
I'd also suggest keeping art of her in the JoJo style with a closed mouth - otherwise, you'll have a really rash, spooky character.


[img]http://img4.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20121204044441/jjba/images/4/40/Irene.png[img]

Currently she kinda has a...Maleficent face going on, lol

That sucks that that's the impression it gives because I used Jolene as a reference. :c


Edit:


Edit2:
Added the punch animation to my previous post.

[Kosheh]

Currently she kinda has a...Maleficent face going on, lol

That sucks that that's the impression it gives because I used Jolene as a reference. :c


Edit:

...oh .__.; sorry if I phrased that a bit assholey, Chris - I tend to go hard in the paint with crit sometimes and it just sounds like I'm making fun of it. x___x;

(I just woke up so bear with me, I'm having trouble decrypting what I just wrote below too)
I think it's the jawline vs the cheek vs the chin. The uh, "difference" between her cheek and her chin are a little too "hard" and defined, and as a result her jawline seems fairly pronounced, giving her an Angelina Jolie look.


Angelina Jolie is a fairly intimidating looking woman so that might actually work though, lol.
But yeah, Jolyene/Irene's cheekbone/is not that pronounced so it still maintains uh, "youthful chubbiness". Their cheekbones are even rounded to give that appearance.


the more i google images from jojo the more i would give my right testicle (the important one) to draw like araki

[Chris2Balls [:B]]

I don't agree with what you said about Jolyne/Irene having soft traits: if anything, I'd say she's one of the more intimidating female characters in the Jojo universe, along with her friend Ermes Costello.
Either way, I see what you mean, so I've made some changes! Daiyo Higashikata, Sugar Diamond and Yasuho Hirose have been my references.
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[Garamonde]

I thought I should point something out:

she should have a bit more of a... youthful looking bust

I hate to say it but she looks middle-aged or above right now with all that droopage

it just seems like a bit of a stretch considering she's so young

[Chris2Balls [:B]]

Yeah, you're right, now that I look back at it, haha. I've brought her bust up, and I changed her arm slightly:

[Garamonde]

Better! I should also mention that I've updated the OP with the new sheet and animations.

[Iocus]

I think the head needs to be shrunk down, the shoulder-to-head width ratio just seems off to me compared to, say, your Sugar Diamond reference.

The lower torso/upper abdomen also seem a little too wide, considering how slim her arms are.